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The House On the Hill

The house on the hill stood spooky and gave me a chill, ominous looking for a thrill, no one lived there because of a kill, the body was found next to the barbecue grill, it was the owner of the next door mill, beaten to a pulp and recognized as Bill, some saw his ghost at the windowsill, staring as if it swallowed a pill, looking palid with haunting eyes and ill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/10/2018 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sonia , enjoyed reading this mystery story! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sonia Walker
Date: 2/10/2018 6:40:00 PM
Eve, your thoughtfulness or appreciated. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 2/5/2018 8:11:00 PM
Delightful read, Sonia. Congrats on your win.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 2/5/2018 9:52:00 PM
Line, this was scary to write. Thank you. ~ Sonia
Date: 2/5/2018 6:51:00 PM
Hi Sonia, This write has everything that I was looking for. It was spooky and creepy. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest:-) Alexis
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Sonia Walker
Date: 2/5/2018 7:28:00 PM
Alexis, I am honored to receive the first place win for this scary poem. Thank you so much. It is certainly a nice surprise. ~ Sonia
Date: 11/6/2017 1:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Sonia - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Sonia Walker
Date: 11/6/2017 10:44:00 AM
Gregory, this one scared me for sure. I appreciate your support. Sincerely, Sonia.
Date: 10/25/2017 10:23:00 PM
Stay away from that house!
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Sonia Walker
Date: 10/25/2017 11:06:00 PM
Kim, it is one house I would stay away from. Thank you for commenting on this scary poem. ~ Sonia
Date: 10/23/2017 8:42:00 PM
Hey, you got a lot of great rhymes with ill!! Well done, Sonia
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Sonia Walker
Date: 10/23/2017 10:37:00 PM
Andrea, this is the most rhymes I have written in a while. Hugs, Sonia.

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