Sonia Walker Poet Monorhyme

The House On the Hill

The house on the hill
stood spooky and gave me a chill,
ominous looking for a thrill, 
no one lived there because of a kill,
the body was found next to the barbecue grill,
it was the owner of the next door mill,
beaten to a pulp and recognized as Bill,
some saw his ghost at the windowsill,
staring as if it swallowed a pill,
looking palid with haunting eyes and ill.

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Eve Roper February 10, 2018 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win, Sonia , enjoyed reading this mystery story! Hugs Eve ~`* Sonia Walker February 10, 2018 at 6:40 PM Eve, your thoughtfulness or appreciated. Hugs, Sonia.

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 8:11 PM Delightful read, Sonia. Congrats on your win. Sonia Walker February 5, 2018 at 9:52 PM Line, this was scary to write. Thank you. ~ Sonia

Alexis Y. February 5, 2018 at 6:51 PM Hi Sonia, This write has everything that I was looking for. It was spooky and creepy. Thanks for participating in my contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest:-) Alexis Sonia Walker February 5, 2018 at 7:28 PM Alexis, I am honored to receive the first place win for this scary poem. Thank you so much. It is certainly a nice surprise. ~ Sonia

Gregory Richard Barden November 6, 2017 at 1:13 AM Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Sonia - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-) Sonia Walker November 6, 2017 at 10:44 AM Gregory, this one scared me for sure. I appreciate your support. Sincerely, Sonia.

Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2017 at 10:23 PM Stay away from that house! Sonia Walker October 25, 2017 at 11:06 PM Kim, it is one house I would stay away from. Thank you for commenting on this scary poem. ~ Sonia

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2017 at 8:42 PM Hey, you got a lot of great rhymes with ill!! Well done, Sonia Sonia Walker October 23, 2017 at 10:37 PM Andrea, this is the most rhymes I have written in a while. Hugs, Sonia.