The Hours of Poetry Both 2u and I Have Spent Decomposing

Though for hour's 

i as myself

And probably you as i

Have spent nay been transfixed

Ever pondering and decomposing
the poetic verse

Starring hazy glazed into an
unfulfilled keyboard dimly lit 
computer screen 

I just can't find the thoughts i 
wish my mind's to find or remitt

Likewise transmit the emotions
i am aspiring to committ to or
admit to

As everytime a word and thought
appears

A second later it disappears

And cometh now hour's late
at night once darkness is
subsidizing and the sun has
begun to peek inside
my curtains

I am as i was hour's earlier still 
starring ever more tired at an
empty computer screen

Devoid of both my word's my
thoughts and emotions

Apart from what i am currently
relating to you now

Simply wishing to whilst away a
passing few hour's away

Until i have or can come up
with something of reverence
to relay

And my mind starts stimulating
and titillating my fingers upon
my ever more expectantly
keyboard key's

When once finished written and 
thus posted i tenuously read back

In hopeless expectation

Of better thing's in hour's to come

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/6/2021 3:43:00 AM
Great expressionism here Christopher, people can feel the pain of your writing block, but hope you don’t mind me saying, I think something deeper is going on here alongside the block, maybe a reflection of your own personal trials of life, terrific poem, keep writing and try not to be too harsh on yourself, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/6/2021 10:28:00 AM
My man David Cheers Ta Never feel the need to have to explain anything to you You automatically just seem to get it Kindest of Regards
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