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The Hourglass

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. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Temporarily I had control Flipping the clear hourglass over The sand starts to flow freely Slipping, skipping, falling One grain upon each Other until All have passed Through the Hole X Sands Of life Slip slowly Through human hands Permeates all known Until acquaintances Have shared in our sands of life Whether good or evil the deeds Those sands touch on all people we know XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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Poet Tellaferro

Date: 8/19/2023 10:58:00 AM

Nice! Very well executed, love the hourglass. Love this poem. Thanks for this little moment of words and thought. We all let too much slip through our hand…

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/19/2023 12:49:00 PM

Yes, we do let things in life slip through our hands everyday. Your visit is very inspiring and uplifting. Thanks, Sara

Charity Johnson

Date: 3/4/2023 4:17:00 AM

This is such a beautiful poem , great job ! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2023 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Charity. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 3/1/2023 7:54:00 AM

Very creative my dear friend Sara. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/1/2023 8:23:00 AM

Len, I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Your visits are always appreciated. Sara

Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/28/2023 7:10:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your winning poem. Great poetry!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 7:55:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate you taking time to read and comment. Sara

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/27/2023 5:42:00 PM

Uniquely presented, wise words, Sara ~ enjoyed! Warmest congratulations on your top win in Brian’s contest

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 2:25:00 AM

Thank you, US, for the nice review and congratulations. Your visits are encouraging. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 2/27/2023 2:11:00 PM

Such a lovely write, Sara. Well-crafted too! Thank you for your recent visits. ~Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 2:19:00 PM

Charles, I am delighted for your visit, taking time to read and comment on my work. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/27/2023 9:46:00 AM

Absolutely! Truth be told, no one gets to heaven before we all do, only reaching lesser levels of grace. We are one, in the heart, soul and body of creation.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 12:23:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Joe. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2023 7:56:00 AM

Very nice, Sara! The metaphor apt!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2023 6:52:00 AM

- You say a lot in this poem, Sara ... time and life, beautifully written ... congratulations / I see it's a winning poem :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 8:15:00 AM

I appreciate the compliment on this one. I always enjoy your visits. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/27/2023 6:38:00 AM

Sara, a big CONGRATS on your win with this creative, moving poem. Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 8:11:00 AM

Janice, Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate you reading it and taking time to comment. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/26/2023 7:32:00 PM

Beautifully done dear Sara.... ! Love this one.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/27/2023 2:50:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/26/2023 5:42:00 AM

I like the art and your message. Your descriptions bring forth the image of time rushing through life. Lovely metaphor.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2023 7:00:00 AM

I appreciate the praise of my work, Vijay. Your visits are important to me for understanding if my work is conveying what I am thinking. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/26/2023 5:13:00 AM

I love your take on this shape and your deep thoughts used to portray it, Sara:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2023 6:59:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jo. Your visits always encourage me. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/26/2023 4:58:00 AM

A highly imaginative way of writing and shaping Sara. An interesting tale you gave. Have a wonderful and blessed weekend!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2023 5:08:00 AM

Your visits, Lasaad, are stupendous. I appreciate the uplifting reviews. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2023 12:49:00 PM

A very creative write/shape. What a story you told. Have a blessed weekend............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. Your visit was prodigious. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/25/2023 10:27:00 AM

Very creative Sara and words so true… Time is like the grains of sand, we cannot stop it slipping from our hands. Belle

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2023 12:13:00 PM

Belle, yes, we are not in control of the hours given and can only do our best to do the best we can with what we have. I am delighted that you dropped by. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/25/2023 10:03:00 AM

Lovely shape and a lesson to be learned.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2023 12:00:00 PM

Why, thank you, Victor. Your visits are prodigious. Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/25/2023 9:51:00 AM

No one can stop the hourglass sands from falling, but we can control what we do with the time that we have... I like the meaning behind this poem and the way you've crafted it's shape. Very creative and well done, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/25/2023 11:52:00 AM

Why, thank you, Kelly. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara