Kim Rodrigues Poet Light Verse

The Honeymoon Plot

teach me, virgin-groom
and correct me if i’m wrong  ~

                   only if you dare

tears fall vaingloriously 
upon your befuddled grave

9/10/2019 
light verse via tanka

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Michelle Faulkner October 5, 2019 at 6:09 PM Oh, I just got the twist on 'plot' - this is so tragic, Kim- Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2019 at 6:54 PM Yes! Thank you, Michelle, for seeing the plot twist!

Caren Krutsinger September 16, 2019 at 7:27 AM Ah, you are a master at combining poetry types, Kim. Kim Rodrigues September 16, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you so much, my friend!

M. L. Kiser September 10, 2019 at 12:47 PM Oops, mistake! Cute piece. Kim Rodrigues September 10, 2019 at 12:57 PM Thanks!