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The Honeymoon Plot

teach me, virgin-groom and correct me if i’m wrong ~ only if you dare tears fall vaingloriously upon your befuddled grave 9/10/2019 light verse via tanka

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Date: 10/5/2019 6:09:00 PM
Oh, I just got the twist on 'plot' - this is so tragic, Kim-
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:54:00 PM
Yes! Thank you, Michelle, for seeing the plot twist!
Date: 9/16/2019 7:27:00 AM
Ah, you are a master at combining poetry types, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2019 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 9/10/2019 12:47:00 PM
Oops, mistake! Cute piece.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thanks!

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