Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

The Honesty of Childhood Friends

Linda, you think that too?
I did not want to tell you, but since Jacque did.
Wait a second! You think I have road rage?

I have known them both for almost 60 years, but
they still betray me,
creeping at me with judgements, pretending to "help me"


Two childhood friends, doing a road rage  intervention.
I am incredulous,
argumentative,
irritated,
ready to pack their stuff for them, and push them out the door.

I hope they will like their little 4 mile hike back to my house.

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Susan Ashley March 30, 2018 at 9:37 PM I love this captivating write Caren. Your indignation and wit shines in your wonderful lines. Your last line is completely awesome! Warmest wishes and Happy Easter.. Caren Krutsinger March 30, 2018 at 11:58 PM Thank you, Susan. It rushed at me and said, "write me! Write me! WRITE ME!" You too, have a wonderful Easter.

Line Gauthier March 30, 2018 at 7:52 AM Good message, Caren. Road rage is scary. Caren Krutsinger March 30, 2018 at 12:00 PM The funniest part to me is that I did not raise my voice, did not give anyone any kind of gesture, just some subtle muttering. However, my friends are from the country, and have never driven in town, or in traffic.

Kevin Shaw March 30, 2018 at 4:00 AM I have just read a few of your poems and I think you have a very unique style of writing, a very talented Lady, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more, Regards, Kevin xx Caren Krutsinger March 30, 2018 at 4:12 AM Thank you, Kevin. I used to write newspaper columns, in the 70's and 80's. I gave up writing for fun around '85 when I decided to return to school and get a degree in something and writing ceased being fun for awhile. All encouragement feels so great! Thank you so much. Happy Easter weekend!