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The Honest Merchant

My friend is shy, ‘cause we call her ‘Pumpkin’. With great trepidation, she enters the gym A look at her behind; And the instructor declined. “By the time ‘YOU’ are thin, fat will be ‘IN’”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/27/2010 10:55:00 AM
Really good one! I would have thought that it would have scored a little higher. Congrats on your win. Dan C
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations Nitesh, on your 4th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:38:00 PM
Congrats on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write...enjoy your win..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:35:00 AM
The sarcasm of the gym instructor was very funny, Nitesh. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:46:00 AM
Very humorous one. I enjoyed
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:32:00 AM
With friends like you, who need enemies !! Mad me smile :)
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:13:00 AM
WHAT A TELLER, LOL THIS IS FUNNY,,SKAT
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