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(a story in senryu stanzas) I get migraines. - lucky me - glare can set me off within seconds. I always have a pair of dark, polarized shades with me - it’s a quirk. When I was fourteen, we lived in Shenzhen, China very near Macau. Macau, China, the “Las Vegas” of Asia, is the home of glare. The Ritz-Carlton, has a glittering galaxy of bright chandeliers. Those chandeliers move, their silhouettes change shape - just stab me with a spork. Did I mention the Mirrors? Every wall served to magnify the light. “You look awful,” my mom said - our two week booking became ten minutes. “I just need sunnies, those would work,” *then I gasped* “I’ll look glamorous!” We changed hotels, but what a small world - my roommate Leong grew up there. We could have passed in the yè shì as teenagers and now we're roommates. . . sunnies = sunglasses (UK slang) yè shì = night market (simplified Chinese)

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Date: 3/2/2024 3:29:00 PM
Dear Anais, Your senryu stanzas really bring out your struggles with migraines and the relentless assault of glare. Your journey from discomfort to unexpected connections was fascinating and heartfelt. I know headaches but not the battle with migraines and can only imagine. This such a personal tale into poetic form, showing us of life's intricate intersections amidst discomfort. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Anais Vionet
Date: 3/2/2024 7:36:00 PM
Migraines aren’t a huge problem for me - actually I have no huge problems at all, truth be told. I know my migraine triggers and I avoid them. I might get one or two a year and although they shut me down - I need a dark quiet place - some get them much worse (I’ve been told). I like the senryu format - it forces me to focus.
Date: 3/2/2024 9:54:00 AM
Sorry about your migraines, I know many who suffer. Cool senryus though. Non-traditional
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Anais Vionet
Date: 3/2/2024 11:14:00 AM
Thanks tom =]

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