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The Home Coming

my breath on your chin’s stubble,

I stroke your strong calloused hands

and feel your desire surging. . . . 

Welcome home, Darling.


For Michael J. Falotico's Contest: "Spicy"

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Harry Horsman

Date: 12/18/2012 2:25:00 PM

Wow Andrea, you so have got it haven't you, this is brillient, and i mean sexy....glad i found this one....

Abraham L

Date: 1/30/2011 8:36:00 AM

Short and sweet, a very romantic homecoming great write

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/24/2011 9:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win, Andrea in Michael Falotico's contest, "Spicy". It's a warm welcome home for someone you love. I am doing great. Thanks for your continuous comments. Wishing you all the best. Peace and love, Andrew.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/24/2011 1:29:00 PM

Hello Andrea, Congratulations on your win hon, well done just beautiful. As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 3:57:00 PM

Andrea**A late Congratulation~ on your #2 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/23/2011 2:13:00 PM

A great 2nd.place win.I think your poems come so easy cause they come out so good.~Luv~Teresa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/23/2011 6:32:00 AM

yes sometime the imagination can take us places we need not discribe to imagine..just a lovely write Andie really!! Congrad's Light & Love

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/22/2011 7:36:00 PM

An honour to share this position with your beautiful entry. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2011 9:35:00 AM

romance at its finest, andrea.. a BIG CONGRATS to you.. :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 9:07:00 AM

A lovely write Andrea, congratulations to you on your win in MF's contest, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:08:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/22/2011 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend on your 2nd place finish in my first contest...love Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 5:58:00 AM

Hi Andrea - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 1/5/2011 12:03:00 PM

Oh my Andrea now this is sexy.I was glad you liked my poem not sure if done it right but thanks for your comment.~Luv~Teresa

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/4/2011 3:50:00 PM

Hello Andrea, This is very passionate and loving. Great write. Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/2/2011 6:04:00 PM

I appears you have a viable contender for the contest here. It displays good descriptiveness while adhering to all the requirements and limitations of a dodoitsu.