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The Hollow Made Complete

Each time I look back to where He took me Speech escapes my lips, His love set me free! This broken one in Mercy was made whole, All the anger, pain, and fear left my soul. My prodigal heart He filled with His peace The hollow, nourished, and was made complete. This life with all its joys and tears.... now His. Cynthia Buhain-Baello ~~~03.26.16 (Rhyme royal -poem with 7 lines in iambic pentameter, rhyme scheme used aa/bb/cdc - two couplets and a tercet.

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Date: 3/27/2016 9:30:00 PM
Cynthia, A very astute observation. Wish all could see with your eyes. Regards, Bob Atkinson
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 3/28/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Bob Atkinson.
Date: 3/27/2016 7:50:00 PM
Cynthia what a lovely little style you have written here, lovely to read this morning, hope you are well, take care......Vera
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 3/27/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thank you Vera Duggan, whether I live or die, I am His. Always well in His care....Cynthia.
Date: 3/26/2016 1:47:00 PM
- This is beautiful, Cynthia - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 3/27/2016 3:56:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise Andresen.
Date: 3/26/2016 3:55:00 AM
Wonderful write:) thank you for sharing:)
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 3/26/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thank you Jo Daniel.

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