The hold of a whiskered man

Dazzled by the lighting 
of his fancy gaze his
lips blew peace. 
i could feel the depth of 
his cherry creek eyes with
warm embrace of visible absence. 

a review of every word said and
how secured it made me feel.
i know there's no honesty
in a bearded man but I wanna
lay my nest in his palms. 
My head feels too clouded to voice the intensity of our match.

look me blue from the
soul and let's cherish
the memories I withhold. 
I want to see you fall in love with me too, 
I'm too good to be true, I hear I'm the 9th wonder. 

this night was made and you were in it.
those words I brewed were a hint to draw closer, I usually say them to ward off people with no yearn for my cute drizzles.
you seemed like a prince with a love for challenge, so i kissed you hoping you'll wake me up from my charade of a sleep.

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Date: 11/27/2023 2:53:00 PM
I trust all bearded men. Heck, Jesus had a beard! Seriously though, if he values you as the 9th wonder of the world you'll do all right
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Tonye George
Date: 11/28/2023 12:16:00 PM
Lol.. Tommy. I hope he does alright by me
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