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The Hill Farmer

He tills within the buzzard's flight this cruel land he calls his home, ewe and wether, milk and bucket, broken spirit, ne'er to roam. He's stuck for good, the laws of nature guide him, be they right or wrong, gone his hopes and his compassion, save for the curlew's mournful song. Courted by the country lasses, love can't penetrate this soul, pain and grief his only helpmeets, daily toil his only goal. Mother, father, gone to dust now, confidants who'd calm his fears, struggling with a heavy heart, internalizing all his tears. It's back to digging, discompacting stones and boulders from the earth, working 'til there's no more sun in Wales, the cradle of his birth. Striving 'gainst the elements he stretches every nerve and bone, every muscle, every sinew, 'til exhaustion brings him home. Ne'er a smile adorns his visage, there simply is no time for this, haggard, careworn, slave to nature, racked by weather's wantonness. Two weeks gone, and there they find him, chided by the wind and rain, cadavered and condemned to fester, never to be sad again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/1/2015 4:12:00 PM
oh, my! there is so much to love about this poem i don't know where to start. despite how sad the subject matter is, the beauty of your language and your rhythm and rhyme are so flawless that i'm just in awe. my favorite verse is the third - it just begs to be read aloud...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/1/2015 4:26:00 PM
It's inspired by R.S. Thomas' poem 'The Airy Tomb.' If you get a chance you should read it. Apart from being a poet he was a farmer, was closely associated with his parishioners and was keenly aware of their troubles. It's fairly long and sad in the end, but remarkably well written with perfect flow and rhyming (just up your alley!) Best wishes, Keith
Date: 6/1/2015 3:29:00 PM
Well I must say Keith, you did this well..'
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 6/1/2015 3:40:00 PM
Thank you sir! much appreciated.

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