The Hill

On a bright sunlit morning, washed brilliant with clover,
the day was alive with complacency, as color.
The day had no reason to quiver off course.
A cat in a tree, was stalking a bird,
and people were rising, to go off to work.
No one was thinking of nuclear things.

Below, in the trenches, a watchman has wandered,
checking a gage, and turning a page, of an old manual cover. 
He scratches his head, and ponders a problem,
wondering how numbers could be out of order?

His heart rate goes up, his blood pressure rises.
He is wise to a problem and soon he's alarmed
He sets off the buzzers, but knows much too late,
the tremor he felt, was not only his own.
But instead, is the syndrome, we've always ignored,
Something horrendous.........Oh, God, what will come,
of the innocent families who live in the zone?

People arising, beginning their day
who scurry their children, in a rush off to school.
and husbands who carry a lunch in their pail, 
punching a time clock, to work at the mill.

Just an ordinary day, in the lives of the men,
women, and children who live 'neath the hill. 
"The Hill", that will bring them the end of the world.

Living their lives, on a tightrope so thin,
daylight begins, but how will it end?
A tremble so mild, invisible wave,
has seeped from the waste, with a radiant hand,
to swollow landscape, and burn with the sun. 

As heart rates get higher, blood pressure rises,
the tremor we feel,  is that of our own.
Oh, God, what becomes
of the innocent targets who dwell in the zone,
men, woman, children......who live 'neath the hill?
"The Hill" that will bring them the end of their world.



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The China Syndrome For Contest: "Equations"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/20/2014 2:21:00 PM
wow, what a write. WAs it based on a specific happening? Or a total made up one for the future? Scary stuff!!! Reminded me of how they just have felt when Hirosima came alone.
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:22:00 AM
Very strong imagery and beautiful word combinations. I especially love "alive with complacency" and "nuclear things." Keep writing. You inspire me!
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:05:00 PM
Hi Carrie, coming back to congratulate you on your win! A powerful write and something to truly fear...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/3/2014 12:47:00 PM
Creative winning entry..Way to go in the contest..Congratulations to you..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2014 7:53:00 PM
You sure foretold a scary future Carrie Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/1/2014 5:05:00 PM
very powerful poem - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 11/29/2014 9:43:00 PM
hard hitting reality poem Carrie very well penned we need to wake up before it is too late hugs 7
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:11:00 PM
they have a name for that hill, it's called pompeii..and you can see the world they were caught in...a well written piece..have a nice thanksgiving
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:48:00 PM
well done Carrie ,putting the message out there. Well written ,good message enjoyed the piece very much.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:17:00 PM
Ow dear Carrie..This gave me goosebumps..and made me th ink of innocent souls who got killed in the past and those yet to die. Sad indeed!To my fvs
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