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The Higher the Flame Has Leaped

. To feel D E E P loss, you must first have known great love ~~~~~ by Carolyn Devonshire *For the “One Amazing Line” Contest Sponsored by Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/18/2010 7:33:00 PM
Fine example of this form! What is your Atlantis book about? Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/18/2010 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn on this well deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congrats on your great win!!!! a winner from the day you wrote it. luv Michael
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:39:00 AM
Carolyn..congrats to you once again. I know this has personal meaning to you. BG
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Date: 12/16/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2010 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your terrific spot in the one line contest. You had very good thoughts for such a short poem. Charles
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Date: 12/15/2010 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn, on first place in my contest, this line just spoke to my soul, for I have known great love and deep loss, and I know you must have too, to write this line~~
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Date: 12/15/2010 12:48:00 PM
Indeed this is a spectacular line, Carolyn...and intensely sad as well! Congratulations!!!!
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:32:00 AM
congrats on your first place win with this beautiful entry Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:17:00 AM
Carolyn, what a wonderful expression of emotion and truth in this line. Congrats on a well deserved 1st place win. Dan C
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:00:00 AM
This is sooo amazing, Carolyn! Perfect Monoku! Congratulations on this worthy honor! I hope you doing fine. Have a beautiful day even though I hear it is cold down there. Much love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2010 6:39:00 AM
Hi Carolyn. Congratulations on your deserved win in the 'One Amazing Line', contest.It could not have gone to a better person. I'm delighted for you. Eamon
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:45:00 PM
Amazing one liner. You deserve the top notch. many congratulations.
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Date: 12/14/2010 9:36:00 PM
Hip hip hooray for you, CArolyn!!! Great DEEP one liner. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:36:00 PM
NUMBER 1 . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . ...... . ....hurray!
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:35:00 PM
Carolyn very nice !!!and so true ~I miss your inspiring words!!!!!!!!!!We had a bit of a Tornado today approx. 15 miles from Salem today~WOW~unheard of!!!!!~May God fill you with inspiration and the strength to help others ~chat with u soon ~nice write~Rick
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:46:00 PM
congrads on your first place win
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Date: 12/14/2010 5:29:00 PM
Good to see you once again at the very top Carloyn. Unique ness! Way to go girl. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/14/2010 1:46:00 PM
Loved it first time round Carolyn, loved it even more the second time. Many congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's contest >> James :)
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Date: 12/14/2010 10:51:00 AM
great to see your name on top of the marquee, carolyn! congrats! :)
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn, on this wonderfully written monoku, and your place in the winning position of the monoku contest. You wrote this with both visual and emotional feeling; as a reader, this is wonderful to experience. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st Place win in Constance's "One Amazing Line" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:16:00 PM
Congrats on this very apt numero uno, for a number one gal. Chas
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:43:00 PM
You should do well with this. I like the gimmick and it flows naturally, without undo attentiuon to itself. Nicely turned, my dear. REgards, Gerard.
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:28:00 AM
Very Very true... love the design of the poem...
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