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My eyes are getting weaker, Tho' I seem to see so much more. My days are getting bleaker, Tho' I laugh more oft than before. A laughter so unnerving, It seems an echo from the Dead, With off-key music serving To bait the phantoms in my head. I see the creatures Helpful, As they surround his final bed. They sway in rhythm woeful Of the transition close ahead. I step aside; I'm knowing That they don't want me in their way. The tension keeps on growing. I simply bow my head and pray. I feel the body leaving, But see it still upon the bed. My heart begins its grieving. His soul is gone, but he is dead.

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Date: 10/19/2023 12:51:00 AM
This is beautiful. The subject is somber yet it is delivered with a whimsical rhyme giving it light at the deadly end. A fav for me.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/19/2023 2:25:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 10/15/2023 11:02:00 AM
I hope you liked it. This is my preferred poetry style. You might also like Sacrifice which was my first poem. A little eerie, I know.
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Date: 10/15/2023 10:06:00 AM
aww Hilda this is such a moving piece i had a huge lump in my throat reading the final stanzas. hugs Jan xx
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