The Heirloom

I lay within a drawer so long
Loneliness was my heart's song

My diamonds never saw the light of day
Since granma's death,I'd been that way

Her grandson went a'courting strong
Maybe my exile now,will not last long

He brought home his bride-to-be
Glowing with pride,for his parents ,to see

He slipped me on her left hand,
They planned a wedding,oh so grand

That special day soon came around
A gold band nearby, I suddenly found

For many years we would not part
Such friendship heals the lonely heart

A day then arrived,of which I live in dread
Returned to a drawer,by a bed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Schiavina Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 7:19 AM
All your poems Brian are so masterfully written they live one speechless and with the feeling that any comment wouldn't do them justice. Thank you for all your work and all your contests especially the one you gave me a gold trophy. I prayed for you asking Jesus to return the happiness you gave me and more.
George   Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 6:49 AM
A gorgeous personification , Brian. Thank you for sharing. ~ Elaine
Strand Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Good to hear from you Elaine,nice to see you around these parts again.Stay creative(& well of course)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 7:44 AM
I like this one better than the other ones of yours that I have read this morning. It’s good to see one with comments. I hope you did well in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 4:15 PM
A FAVE for me, Brian. Thanks for this lovely poem as well as for sponsoring so many contests. I called your contribution the pulse of the site and I mean it. Line xx
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 4:56 AM
contd:Line,I have read many many ' published poets' in my studies in recent years and there more than a score of PS poets here over the years who imho who rate equally thereto hence my contests.When I list a poet therein with a Ist therein it means that work equals that judgement.
Strand Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 4:42 PM
Cheers Line,unless folk here enter the pulse slows & there is no showcase of their giftings.Your support to my contests is much valued.It provides me with a convenient opportunity to read the poetics here,so its win-win.PS has been the 'best' of its kind on net since at least 2007 in my experience.I have been priviledged to ' meet' many peer poets
Duet Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Wow! What an excellent poem! I love it. FAVED
Strand Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thanks Carole,so glad you enjoyed it
Gauthier Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:24 PM
Very touching. Well written. Thank you.
Strand Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 12:50 AM
You are too kind Line
Gauthier Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Your poem HEIRLOOM is very warm and touching. Thanks for sharing.
Strand Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Thanks Line
Hester Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 9:00 PM
This is my favorite poem of the ones I read today, because it shows life revolving.
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:51 AM
You are too kind Anna.I think this did ok in a conrest from way back when rgds Brian
Sergi Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Hi Brian: A tribute to an old ring. I really liked this poem. You are a breath of fresh air to Poetry Soup.
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:53 AM
Thank you for the compliment Ralph, best wishes with your creative endeavours.rgds Brian
Sergi Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Hi Brian: A tribute to an old ring. I really liked this poem. You are a breath of fresh air to Poetry Soup.
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 5:12 PM
I can feel the emotion from sadness to joy to a comfortable caring then the sadness once again..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thanks Sara trust all is well? rgds Brian
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May 31, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful poem! Love it!
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Glad you liked it Ina.rgds Brian
Murray Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 1:13 PM
Brian, this is beautiful. And long before the ring called Precious.
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Thanks for your kind comments Jean rgds Brian
Heck Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 7:05 AM
Dear Brian - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:29 PM
Brian I believe this is by far the longest poem I have seen of yours - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:10 AM
Brian, congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 6:08 AM
Warmest congrats dear Brian on making it through the first round! Good luck! Love, Shar
Santiago Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 3:56 AM
Hello Sir, my congratulations to you on your flawless piece "The Heirloom" through to the final round, goodluck! Rgds, Ernesto
Coet Avatar
August 21, 2008 at 11:07 AM
Way to go Brian. A great and well deservednwin for you. -ED-
Winter Avatar
August 15, 2008 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations Brian on your Second Place win in Elaine's Personification contest! Outstanding and so well deserved! Love, Shar
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