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THE HEAVYWEIGHT AND THE FEATHERWEIGHT
Poem written for Ridiculous Comparisons Poetry Contest, Miranda Hawley, sponsor, July 23, 2025
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There’s the elephant, a lumbering titan, a true heavy weight with a heart that beats like thunder, each footfall a seismic event, a gentle giant, who with the grace of a ballet dancer could crush a car if ballet were performed in slow motion and involved a lot of mud. Then there’s the hummingbird—a blur of iridescence, a caffeine- sugar- fueled acrobat, a featherweight warrior who sips nectar like a drunken poet, lost in a world of fleeting moments. It’s a tiny, feathered daredevil, with the attention span of a gnat.

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Date: 7/23/2025 6:54:00 PM
lol, I love the imagery and the comparison, that is such a lovely photo too, you have a knack for pairing words and imagery, thank you for this Sara :)
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/24/2025 5:52:00 PM
awww, thank you for visiting, Rose, and for your kind, complimentary words. It's the teacher in me that like to find good illustrations. thanks for noticing, hugs, Sara
Date: 7/23/2025 6:46:00 PM
I imagine ---- Arnold Schwarzenegger and Danny DeVito...
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Date: 7/24/2025 5:52:00 PM
now that's hilarious! Hadn't thought of that...thanks for visiting and commenting..enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 7/23/2025 6:35:00 PM
A very enjoyable poem, Sara. I hope it does well in the contest! Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/24/2025 5:53:00 PM
thank you hubby...your soooo supportive, hugs

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