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signed, 
In honor of my hero, Edgar Allan Poe
1-31-2019 

Note, this now finished piece was the other poem(4th) that I had
wanted to present when honoring Poe in my ongoing dedication series.
I only just finished it today, early this morn. I hope you may find
it dark, ghastly, and very Poe'esq in somber mood and its darkness..

The Heavy Price Paid To End The Deepest Of Dark Pains In my night-dreams, flies jargon of oracles wise and profound words given that break heavy chains by which I was once bound just a conversation with my dark-muse and her ancient friends as she promised, they provided a means to making of my amends tho', they are not angels, and each one exacts a heavy price one that costs this soul very dearly and I have to pay thrice! For when I reenter this dark world and walk among the dead I am commanded to do a ghastly deed, one I so truly dread kill, on first day of each week, not true villains as a great release my victims are to be the innocent or else their help will cease this long forty year vicious cycle only ends when I shall perish or dare'st to murder that which my heart most fervently so cherish! Alas! They knew well such great cost I would never ever dare to pay what do they say, poet's ink is the blood that keeps devils away yet all of my devils dance gaily within my red-blood splattered ink and to this day, I sorry at how low my desires caused me to sink tho' with glee, they told me this also would make it all go away if I would murder my own beloved wife and use her blood to pay! Now to commit that unthinkable act, its time has too soon came I had played with fire, sought the dark gods, played their game the oracles I told would get their last pay come full moon tonight this would bring buckets of blood, to their greatest of delights each one appeared and gave me more useless advice to seal the deal having no clue, that this old tired poet, himself would thus kill! All that gloomy day I worked to make sharp the sacrificial knife to kill the monstrous monster they had made, not its beloved wife she I had sent very far away, to visit her beloved family in Spain to spare her this night's bloody sight, never to see her again now the full moon has risen, that dark, dreaded midnight hour came I give you my friends, these sad words bereft of a dark poet's name! signed, In honor of my hero, Edgar Allan Poe 1-31-2019 Note, this now finished piece was the other poem(4th) that I had wanted to present when honoring Poe in my ongoing dedication series. I only just finished it today, early this morn. I hope you may find it dark, ghastly, and very Poe'esq in somber mood and its darkness..

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Date: 3/7/2019 7:57:00 AM
I want to thank you one and all. Your reading these famous poets dedication poem series and your replying has caused me to continue this laborious and very hard task. I so truly appreciate your kindness, support and continued reading of this series. God bless...
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Date: 3/3/2019 2:31:00 PM
It does have the flavor of Poe's dark work Robert. I am off to read the next dedication. Well done my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/10/2019 5:41:00 AM
Hi Robert, I am so glad you finished this most dark, brooding and exceptional piece. I could read such poetry as this for hours on end and never get enough. Another great tribute poem to the master, written by your skilfull and creative pen. Your poetry sings in this Gothic style. You shall always be a poet of the highest order Robert. You grace the soup with true poetic grace. This dark write flows so well. It is definitely Poe. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 2/1/2019 5:07:00 PM
Love the drama. Great tribute, Robert.
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Date: 2/1/2019 9:46:00 AM
Wow! I just don't know how you do it.
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:24:00 AM
A great dedication Robert written in true Poe style very deep and dark. Tom.
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Date: 1/31/2019 10:34:00 PM
There is darkness, reaching deep, deep within- allowing your pen to create it. Which is powerful indeed!! Such should flow upon the page like this- so the reader can feel. You certainly have done that here. Bravo!!! Well done my dear friend. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/31/2019 5:41:00 PM
Truly, "dark, ghastly, and very Poe'esq in somber mood and its darkness." It pulls out the dark beast that lies within us all; the measure of a person is that he or she has come to control that beast. "poet's ink is the blood that keeps devils away yet all of my devils dance gaily within my red-blood splattered ink", this is so powerful; explosive imagery. I think that Poe would not feel so alone in the dark world, after reading this. But he might ask you, "you don't have mirrors do you?"
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Date: 1/31/2019 2:48:00 PM
beautifully stark like a brooding poe-like melody, robert... one for the books...huggs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/31/2019 3:42:00 PM
Nette, my dear friend. Thank you for reading and responding to this ongoing famous poets dedication series. With this being the fourth poem , written in dedication to the greatest dark poetry master of them all, Edgar Allan Poe. Whose fame exceeds that any other poet , especially in the realm of dark poetry.
Date: 1/31/2019 9:09:00 AM
Dark and ghastly it is. A very fine poem.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/31/2019 1:07:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. These kinds of poems, dark tales are very difficult to compose, since it requires great imagination and not verses from a poet's own heart. To write dark or Gothic type poetry(HORROR/POE'ESQ) to me, is an exercise in stretching my imagination. This world is a dark place ruled by evil. poets should speak about such-- not run away from it, IMHO..

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