The Heavens

The Heavens The sun nourishes. The tree of life flourishes. God's glory declared. © May 4, 2010

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/17/2010 12:10:00 PM

This haiku is so true, Dane Ann--thank you for this reminder :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/8/2010 6:19:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, hope you had a good trip.

Date: 5/7/2010 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful message in this poem. Blessings to you for sharing it. Keep on writing! Have a good weekend. Karen

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/7/2010 2:39:00 PM

This is a good one.Hope all is well,just wanted to stop by and say hello.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2010 12:31:00 PM

Awesome haiku, Dane Ann. It's so nice to see you posting new work again. Many folks here have missed you, including me. Much love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/4/2010 5:31:00 PM

Amen and amen. jhl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/4/2010 5:10:00 PM

Glad to have you back Dane! Light & Love

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 2:49:00 PM

Hi Dane Ann, missed your comments recently. Nicely penned Haiku.Love, Gert

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/4/2010 5:51:00 AM

awesomely beautiful Dana. Looks like a winner to me! if not the winner! -Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2010 4:38:00 AM

Yes that Tree Of Life is alive and well somewhere and we will be eating of the twelve different kinds of fruits someday...There will be healing for the nations in that Tree and there will be no more war and hate we will be healed..Great topic that you have chosen...Sara