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The Heavens

sparkling diamonds on velvet cloth ~
stars in the night sky



Written on 14th August 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 9/20/2020 2:33:00 PM
Earths night jewels, beautiful, Emilia : )
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/20/2020 9:48:00 PM
Thank you Emilia, there is no better view on a clear night. Im pleased you liked it. Tom
Date: 8/20/2020 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. May I please have some of your diamonds?????? Enjoy your win and day............
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/20/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Paula, Ill send some via soup mail lol. Hope you're well Tom
Date: 8/20/2020 6:15:00 AM
Tom this two liner is a gem, excuse the pun - really beautiful - congratulations on you fine win. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/20/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer I'm pleased you liked it. Tom
Date: 8/19/2020 8:45:00 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest, Tom. Just shows how sparkling a two-liner this is, as Brian is predisposed to longer poems, methinks. Congrats!! Way to go! :) Gershon
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/20/2020 1:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, im. Happy both you and he liked it, didn't do well in another contest, you win some you lose some. Tom
Date: 8/17/2020 8:48:00 PM
NICE!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/18/2020 12:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Timothy. Tom
Date: 8/17/2020 6:38:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Tom...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/18/2020 12:55:00 AM
Thank you Michael, there is no better view on a clear night. Tom
Date: 8/17/2020 6:07:00 AM
LOVELY, descriptive piece, Tom. Janice
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/17/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, im pleased that you liked it. Tom
Date: 8/16/2020 2:32:00 PM
Sparkling forth from your stellar pen, my friend! :) gw
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/17/2020 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, there is no scene better than a clear night with millions of stars to gaze at. Tom
Date: 8/16/2020 11:45:00 AM
Hello tom Cunningham, stars shining in the dark sky is like diamonds shining bright.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2020 4:51:00 PM
Hello Tom,I also never get tired of looking at the stars. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/16/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, always reminds me of diamonds on a black velvet cloth, never get tired of seeing it. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 5:18:00 PM
I would like to have that cloth...Nice imagery here...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/16/2020 1:32:00 AM
Thank you Arturo, you'd certainly be set up for life. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 2:54:00 PM
Stunning, my friend, Best wishes, Pangie xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 3:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Panagiota, a view I never get tired of seeing. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 12:59:00 PM
this is lovely, tom! good luck in the contest...
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Ilene, im happy that you liked it. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 12:34:00 PM
Oh wow... Best one I've read in this contest... Love the use of words and imagery..
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 12:54:00 PM
Thank you very much S. O., just back from Woolacombe bay, weather was warm and sunny, but raining now in Worcestershire. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 11:38:00 AM
Awesome, Tom! For a play, I made a black velvet gown that had tiny bits of glitter on it. You described the night sky beautifully. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, Im quite lucky as I live on the edge of town and the light pollution isnt too bad. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 10:17:00 AM
I love this Tom. Beautiful imagery. Blessings xxoo
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 11:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie, im pleased that you liked it. I hope you are well Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 6:29:00 AM
So beautiful Tom. Very nice :)
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 6:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, im glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 5:42:00 AM
Artfully written my friend, Tom. Love it.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, im happy you liked it. There is no better view on a clear night Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 5:03:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Tom. All the best.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, im pleased you liked it. Tom
Date: 8/15/2020 3:25:00 AM
As an amateur astronomer I love that sight on a cloudless night! Good luck in the contest.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/15/2020 3:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Krish, Sadly today light pollution spoils the view for many. When I was younger I used to go to Ireland in the countryside and the sky was like black velvet and I'll always remember that view like God had thrown a handful of diamonds across the sky. Tom
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