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The Heat of Romance

Love trills in on wings, Beacon of my heart, Holding hands with hope, Chasing gloom away, Could be destiny. Moving towards dawn, Souls touching souls, Skin upon skin, Burning desire. Falling deep, Eyes devour, Lips are locked. Vessels Entwined. Fire. form-D---Deb Dec. 24th,2011 for contest "Romance" sponsored by David Williams

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Date: 12/25/2011 5:05:00 PM
Reads like a winner..I am glad that David did this one..So varied and such romance I have read...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by my blog...Sara
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Date: 12/24/2011 1:39:00 PM
Nice meeting you here in PS Deb. Your hexaverse is well-done, Good luck in the contest. I am awed by the talent that poets like you create and portray so well. Happy holidays and I am looking forward to check on you again. Dalila
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Date: 12/24/2011 11:46:00 AM
from start to finish, building to passion. GREAT poem, Deb. It should do well in the contest.
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Date: 12/24/2011 3:41:00 AM
Very passionate....You are already in 2012:)
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:44:00 AM
oops! thanks Kash...I fixed it!

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