John Loving Iii Poet Quatrain

The Hearts Warmth

It is the gift
when none was expected
It is providing those things
for those who are neglected

It is a word
when feelings are down
A pat on the back
though you fell on the ground

Joining forces
with those rejected
Helping compleat
so work is perfected

The hearts warmth 
is in sharing a game
The hearts warmth 
is in giving a name

The hearts warmth
an emotional theme
A feeling of comfort
receiving an offering

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Phyllis Babcock December 31, 2010 at 9:22 AM A warm heart heals the emotion and leaves comfort. Well said John. God Bless Phyl

Crystal Wilkins December 29, 2010 at 9:57 AM very well written, has a lot of emotion within those words keep writing thank you for your comment however the poem had nothing to do with attractiveness of the person but being lost within a crowd. Crystal~X~

Doris Culverhouse December 28, 2010 at 1:40 PM great thoughts!!

Lynette Chachere December 26, 2010 at 9:42 AM a hearts warmth that mends the abandoned & depressed.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Carolyn Devonshire December 22, 2010 at 1:43 PM Soup mail in a moment, John

Carrie Richards December 22, 2010 at 7:29 AM I love the message of hope and kindness....such inspiration to all of us, to show the love and share a bit of ourselves. A lovely poem, John. Blessings this holiday season! Love, Carrie

Wilma Neels December 20, 2010 at 7:18 AM A beautiful write John and so true as well.. ;)

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 19, 2010 at 9:10 AM Beautiful John, so heart warming. In my life to give is to receive the greatest reward. I'm deeply moved by this write... Lay

Sharon Ruebel December 16, 2010 at 11:47 AM Hello John, This is beautiful! I love it, just so touching and the words are so true. Thank you for this As Always, Shar

John Freeman December 16, 2010 at 9:57 AM (It is providing those things for those who are neglected.It is a word.Joining forces.is in sharing a game.an emotional theme.) An amazing feeling, when these thing you mentioned begins to warm the heart, John. We sometimes neglect to do them, and why, when they promote such a feeling of warming accomplishment. Smile. Thanks for your graceful coment, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

Diane Locksley December 16, 2010 at 9:41 AM That's a good heart you have, John. I'm a big fan of your poetry. Your friend, Diane

Carol Sunshine Brown December 16, 2010 at 3:40 AM You have written an exceptional poem here John iii. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love and blessings always, Carol

Sara Kendrick December 15, 2010 at 1:45 PM Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I hope that you have many more for us to enjoy...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire December 15, 2010 at 12:36 PM That unexpected gift that fell from your card last year really brightened my outlook. If anyone knows how to cheer a friend up, it is you, Sweet John! This poem has me smiling thinking of your loving and compassionate nature. Love you, Carolyn

Susan Palli December 15, 2010 at 11:21 AM beautiful!