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The Hearts Warmth

It is the gift
when none was expected
It is providing those things
for those who are neglected

It is a word
when feelings are down
A pat on the back
though you fell on the ground

Joining forces
with those rejected
Helping compleat
so work is perfected

The hearts warmth 
is in sharing a game
The hearts warmth 
is in giving a name

The hearts warmth
an emotional theme
A feeling of comfort
receiving an offering

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/31/2010 9:22:00 AM A warm heart heals the emotion and leaves comfort. Well said John. God Bless Phyl Login to Reply

Crystal Wilkins Date: 12/29/2010 9:57:00 AM very well written, has a lot of emotion within those words keep writing thank you for your comment however the poem had nothing to do with attractiveness of the person but being lost within a crowd. Crystal~X~ Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 12/28/2010 1:40:00 PM great thoughts!! Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 12/26/2010 9:42:00 AM a hearts warmth that mends the abandoned & depressed.. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/22/2010 1:43:00 PM Soup mail in a moment, John Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/22/2010 7:29:00 AM I love the message of hope and kindness....such inspiration to all of us, to show the love and share a bit of ourselves. A lovely poem, John. Blessings this holiday season! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/20/2010 7:18:00 AM A beautiful write John and so true as well.. ;) Login to Reply

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway Date: 12/19/2010 9:10:00 AM Beautiful John, so heart warming. In my life to give is to receive the greatest reward. I'm deeply moved by this write... Lay Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 12/16/2010 11:47:00 AM Hello John, This is beautiful! I love it, just so touching and the words are so true. Thank you for this As Always, Shar Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/16/2010 9:57:00 AM (It is providing those things for those who are neglected.It is a word.Joining forces.is in sharing a game.an emotional theme.) An amazing feeling, when these thing you mentioned begins to warm the heart, John. We sometimes neglect to do them, and why, when they promote such a feeling of warming accomplishment. Smile. Thanks for your graceful coment, they are important to me. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 12/16/2010 9:41:00 AM That's a good heart you have, John. I'm a big fan of your poetry. Your friend, Diane Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/16/2010 3:40:00 AM You have written an exceptional poem here John iii. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love and blessings always, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/15/2010 1:45:00 PM Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..I hope that you have many more for us to enjoy...Sara Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/15/2010 12:36:00 PM That unexpected gift that fell from your card last year really brightened my outlook. If anyone knows how to cheer a friend up, it is you, Sweet John! This poem has me smiling thinking of your loving and compassionate nature. Love you, Carolyn Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 12/15/2010 11:21:00 AM beautiful! Login to Reply