The Heart of the Brave (For Eric Edward)

Eric Edward, what an inspiration
Fighting for a cause in a dangerous location

Browns, greens and dark colours match
Loading shells and weapons in a particular batch

The glint in his eye of that brave young soul
Heart beating pure, being home safe is his goal

Orders given to a job he may not understand
Passionate for his country on this foreign land

Heat blazing down on his fragile body
Brotherhood so strong, never shoddy

Maybe he is used as a pawn in a political battle
Unlike weak politicians, he’ll never throw in his rattle

Leading by example in a courageous way 
In a world that looses patriotic views every day.

I remember the individuals who risk their lives 
They also have Sons, mothers, brothers and wives

Lets not forget ‘Sweetheart’ who worries every night 
Mother to her child who worries, hoping he’ll be alright 

Never judge on what is right and what is wrong
The world is a long way from singing a harmonic song

Thank you for the efforts of the brave
Hopefully one day its your life I will be able to save  

Come home safe to your worried mother
The day will be soon to embrace one another.

God bless.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/20/2010 1:38:00 PM
A most beautiful piece Gareth, for Linda-Marie son - it shows the heart in you my friend >> James
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:51:00 AM
Great rhythm and rhyme in these couplets...You have choosen an excellent topic about which to write your work..I am sadden that our young men and ladies have to fight the battles in foreign lands...Sometimes we forget that they are there and are keeping our homeland free...Sara
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Date: 3/9/2010 4:37:00 AM
Thankxxx Gareth .. I am so deeply touched and honored for this work of art and priceless words to describe the situation they face every day ..all the military sons and daughters and the Mom's who wait and pray... this is a magnificent tribute to my son and to me and I am extremely blessed to have a good friend and fellow poet as u Gareth... a special new favorite today.. will be sending to Eric Edward soon.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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