The Haunted House

Why, in a haunted house, do we scream?
We know that the monsters are mechanized.
We know that the bumps are all oversized.
We know things are not what they seem.

Why, in that haunted house, do we chuckle?
We’re bombarded with bright lights, loud screams,
thumps and bumps; we imagine extremes
but know it’s all fake as we grip the belt buckle.

Why, in our own home, when we hear creaking,
don’t we cry or guffaw, but instead
we tiptoe, gasp and believe the undead
and the zombified trespasser come softly sneaking.

Why, when the horror and terror aren’t real,
Do we shriek with delight, while thrilled to the bone?
Why, when we know that we’re really alone,
Are panic and dread the emotions we feel?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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artly Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 11:30 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : [email protected]
mysore Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 9:18 PM
lovely. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
Kitchin Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Gail, I enjoyed your creative poem, congratulations on your winning placement.
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October 13, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Enjoyed reading your haunted house poem Gail. When we are told a place is haunted, our thoughts take control, rather than us controlling our thoughts.
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Hi Gail I love the differences between a haunted house at a fair and being at home but i must say i do feel a little anxious when i am home alone and there is an unexplained noise:-) hugs Jan xx
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