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The Haunted Broken and Beleaguered Soul

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The Haunting Of A Broken Spirit And Beleaguered Soul. . Her pricing haunting blood shocked eyes Reflect her heavy rain cloud acid corroded heart And spirit broken beleaguered soul Although in the summer of her blossoming youth She aged beyond her tender gifted years Life has took it’s scourging toll And she can no longer hold back Her floods of painful tears . The bombshell blast that devastated and destroyed her life Left her shell shocked unable to piece together The shards and carnage left behind Her dreams have turned into nightmares Her bed but a bed of nails her broken spirit tied to the mast She once dreamed of idle lush green bejewelled meadows But now dwells in a mine field in total darkness And with every breathe and step she takes She feels the blast . Snared and tangled in a cobweb The more she riddles the more she's tangled Her hapless struggle is all in vane She stands on the ege of oblivion And welcomes an end to her bitter anguish and pain. . Peter Dome©2021.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/10/2021 6:35:00 AM

A dark and heart breaking tale. Loved it. ~~

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Sir. most kind glad you liked it. Have a great week my friend. Pete.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/9/2021 12:46:00 PM

bad day? thought so..people in general don't comment as much on the site now, nothing personal, sometimes people read but don't comment, sometimes they don't know what to say..the important thing is the poem's created and it says what you want it to say..xx

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:28:00 PM

I don't think there is any excuse. people don't have to comment but they do on many other sites. I notice people have there favourites, and rightly so. they are so talented and nice people. but i get the impression it's not what you write, but who you are. thanx x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2021 11:45:00 AM

Hello Peter yes your poetry does come from your heart. So does mine. I try to express myself the best I can. Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 3:37:00 PM

HelloPeter, i have high blood pressure, High cholesterol,high blood pressur,osteo arthritis. Also a heaaides hernia. The arthritis bothers now and then not all at the same time. Cheers Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 12:27:00 PM

Peter she gives herself needles several times a day. There are times I get depressed. I listen to classical music to calm down it soothes me. then i feel better. How do you handle fatigue? Are you on pills for that? Even though you are going through all these things We are still friendsmy dear. x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 12:15:00 PM

Hello Peter, yes the best poetry comes from the heart. Your poetry also comes from the heart. You stay safe. Darlene x You are welcome my friend. x

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:30:00 PM

The best poetry comes from the heart yours shows that.I don't think. my heart speaks. thank you my friend stay safe. X

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2021 11:42:00 AM

Hello Peter, It takes me time to create a poem. I never know if it is good enough to submit. I submit every 4 days because ideas for poetry does not come easy to me. In my dreams I get ideas. Wake up write down the title then go back to sleep. Write the poem the next day.I agree with what you said. Yes we express ourselves the best we can. Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 12:33:00 PM

Hello Peter, You are right a poem can not be forced. it does not work out that way. It has to come gradually. Then you are ready to created poetry. Take care. x Darlene

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:32:00 PM

Wow I've heard of that. I think if we try to force it. the flow stops.Best to leave it for a while do something else and it will come. picture prompts help. Thanx take care X

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2021 11:35:00 AM

Hello Peter, I like the way you create your poetry. I can tell that you put your heart into it. I feel the sadness in this poem you created. Poems are to have feelings of sadness or happiness etc. You have health problems! What type of health problems do you have? You never told me. I hope it is not serious. Darlene x

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/12/2021 12:21:00 PM

Hello Peter, my niece has diabetes the type that specialist can not find a way to help her. She is on a special diet. if she gets off the diet and eats normal food she lands up in the hospital. She struggles wit her diet every day. So far so good

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thank you sweetheart I have Chronic fatigue,bad diabetes, and depression .X

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/9/2021 8:20:00 AM

- A soul that is marked for life ... dreams that are shattered ... with a little hope she may be able to create new dreams ... a wonderful but sad poem, Peter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome
Date: 1/10/2021 1:36:00 PM

thank you my friend, Bless. let's hope so. hope you are ok. take care Pete. x

Peter Dome

Date: 1/9/2021 5:59:00 AM

I know my poems are not brilliant but why few comment?.im grateful for everyone, but have never had so few comments on this site as any other. and i have to pay. when every other site is free?I will not subscribe again.I try to support as many poets as I can with the precious little time I have with poor health. I feel we should all be supportive to everyone. we may not always liked for our words, or our poems not good. but we are all growing and need encouragement. It's not so much how good you are but that we express ourselves the best we can.My poems come from the heart.