The Harp

Hibiscus glistened in their beaded sleeves
as wind played keys atonal in the oak.
I plucked taut rain strings weeping from the eaves
and heard an angel whisper as he spoke

the scattered verses in my nomad mind
imprisoned in the gray cell of a storm.
Then as I played that harp in restless kind
a blue wisp in the clouds began to form.

6/13/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ravidas Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 1:38 PM
Laughing out with pleasure... Hmm, this is new for me. I must think it out)
Ravidas Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Jesus, when I got to a blue wisp, I laughed out with pleasure. How comes?
Cozart Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 11:36 AM
Gosh, I don't know. Was it something I said?
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Once more with feeling: Such tantalizing, sensual and 'sense-ual' imagery. Excellent! ~ Gershon
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:18 PM
The scattered verses in my nomad mind... brilliant Dale
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:27 PM
Thanks, Tim!
Krampe Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Stunning imagery, Dale, and I love how you work with the sounds (beaded sleeves, weeping eaves)- this needs to be read aloud. Is this for the contest? It's such an odd contest prompt, I have no idea how to even begin - and now that I've read your poem, I won't even bother writing one :)
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Yes, it is for a contest. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Nice work Dale, this should do very well in the contest...
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Thank you very much, Charlie.
Gentile Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:44 PM
I agree Dale, just beautiful imagery. I really want to hear it !!!
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Aw, thanks, Mike.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:13 AM
A wonderment of images, Dale! Hugs...Kim
Cozart Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:20 AM
Thanks so much, Kim.
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