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~2nd Place~
Contest:  Eight Word Challenge-Bardenesque
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 02/21/2019

Required Theme: Romantic Encounter, 
   in the style of Gregory R. Barden, Top Bard on Poetry Soup!
Required Words: (in order of appearance):
   happenstance, whispers, wafting, 
   flutters, dank, folly, perchance, daub

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For Flash Poetry Challenge #5
Theme, "Chance Encounter"
Sponsor, Mark Toney


By happenstance, we lock our eyes
     as I see her on the winding stairs
        as whispers float around the room.
Well-known and beautiful, at that moment,
     her dark brown eyes are fixed on me.

The smell of roses is wafting through the air,
     and I take one, breathing in its scent-
          feeling flutters never known before.
My normal world appears so dark and dank
     compared to this space where I am now.

This powerful attraction- is it truth or folly?
     Perchance it is a dream- but as I daub
          my cheek with dewy petals of the rose,
I know for sure a dream it's not- for now
     she stands before me, our eyes still locked-

her hands accept my offered rose-
     and I feel Cupid's arrow bind our hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/21/2024 8:35:00 PM
My, my! Such a beautiful, romantic write, Sandra. Enjoyed, start to finish.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/15/2025 1:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/18/2024 10:43:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my Flash Poetry Challenge, Sandra. Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I'm so glad you brought this gem out of the vault to be viewed and appreciated again! A FAV for me. This convinces me to allow new and old poems for the flash challenges. Kudos to you, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/15/2025 1:25:00 PM
Hi Mark, I'm so glad I made the randomly chosen list and you enjoyed my poem, and thanks for the FAV! I enjoyed the challenge! Sandra
Date: 2/23/2019 10:58:00 PM
Lovely romance with such feeling, Sandra, good use of the required words, enjoyed the read.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sheri, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/22/2019 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful write Sandra..Congrats on your win...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for your visit, lovely comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 2/21/2019 5:34:00 PM
Wonderful writing Sandra, Greg would be pleased I'm sure, congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, John! I appreciate my nice placement and your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 2/21/2019 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place! It is a lovely poem! I had this whole vision of her descending the spiral staircase! Beautiful things always happen when there is a spiral staircase in the vicinity. Lol! Enjoyed!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sherilynn, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/25/2019 12:32:00 PM
Magnificently bardenespue! You aced this challenge Sandra, excellent piece, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/25/2019 3:59:00 PM
Oh, thank you very much, Maureen! I am so delighted with your enthusiastic, positive comment! Hugs, Sandra
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