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The Happenstance

By happenstance, we lock our eyes as I see her on the winding stair... soft whispers float around the room. Well-known and beautiful, at that moment, her dark brown eyes are fixed on me. The smell of roses is wafting through the air, and I take one, breathing in its scent... feeling flutters never known before. My normal world appears so dark and dank compared to this space where I am now. This powerful attraction...is it truth or folly? Perchance it is a dream...but as I daub my cheek with dewy petals of the rose, I know for sure a dream it's not...for now she stands before me, our eyes still locked... her hands accept my offered rose... and I feel cupid's arrow bind our hearts. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Eight Word Challenge-Bardenesque Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 02/21/2019 Required Theme: Romantic Encounter, in the style of Gregory R. Barden, Top Bard on Poetry Soup! Required Words: (in order of appearance): happenstance, whispers, wafting, flutters, dank, folly, perchance, daub

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:58:00 PM
Lovely romance with such feeling, Sandra, good use of the required words, enjoyed the read.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sheri, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/22/2019 7:50:00 AM
Beautiful write Sandra..Congrats on your win...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for your visit, lovely comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 2/21/2019 5:34:00 PM
Wonderful writing Sandra, Greg would be pleased I'm sure, congrats on a fine win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, John! I appreciate my nice placement and your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 2/21/2019 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place! It is a lovely poem! I had this whole vision of her descending the spiral staircase! Beautiful things always happen when there is a spiral staircase in the vicinity. Lol! Enjoyed!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2019 5:46:00 PM
Thank you, Sherilynn, for your visit and very supportive and uplifting comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/25/2019 12:32:00 PM
Magnificently bardenespue! You aced this challenge Sandra, excellent piece, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/25/2019 3:59:00 PM
Oh, thank you very much, Maureen! I am so delighted with your enthusiastic, positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

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