The Hanging Man

There once lived a man, abhorrent and cruel,
With family he resided, high up on the moor. 
He yet drew breath, a misfortune unbeknownst,
To those in his care, their fate soon manifest.

His wife had passed, through illness he claimed,
He sent his two eldest, to labour the land.
So he remained, with child daughter abode,
As his drinking grew more, and his purse ever lighter.

On one stormy night, in a drunken rage,
He took her life, for two shillings and six pence saved.
Bearing child in grasp, to a disused mine he tossed her remains,
And claimed to his neighbours, he had sent her away.

By sheer fortune and distrust, the vicar enquired,
And so it was known, the man had lied.
Reports of a distant light, on that stormy night came in,
Led a search to the mine, where lost child was found.

So the man had fled, but the law followed close behind,
Even across the vast channel, he could not evade his fate.
In chains he was brought back, to face his shameful crime,
And so he was despatched by rope, the hanging man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/16/2025 11:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:28:00 AM
A beautifully narrated poem in free verse. Keep writing. Wish to read more from you.
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Date: 12/16/2021 12:18:00 AM
Wow Rebecca what a riveting ,well written poem. I so enjoyed it. Debx
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Rebecca Alderson
Date: 12/29/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Deb, I appreciate you feedback :)
Date: 11/11/2021 8:31:00 AM
A rather moving piece Rebecca with nice imagery and insightful expression too. I don't know if this is historically true but you've told it excellently. Great to meet fellow brit here on PS, I'm north of the border. Have a great day though its dark now. Gordon
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Rebecca Alderson
Date: 11/17/2021 6:50:00 AM
Thank you Gordon. It's inspired by true events. The Hanging Man was called William Burgess, and he lived in Simonsbath in Somerset. You'll find more information via Google, if you're interested.
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