The Hanging Man

There once lived a man, abhorrent and cruel,
With family he resided, high up on the moor. 
He yet drew breath, a misfortune unbeknownst,
To those in his care, their fate soon manifest.

His wife had passed, through illness he claimed,
He sent his two eldest, to labour the land.
So he remained, with child daughter abode,
As his drinking grew more, and his purse ever lighter.

On one stormy night, in a drunken rage,
He took her life, for two shillings and six pence saved.
Bearing child in grasp, to a disused mine he tossed her remains,
And claimed to his neighbours, he had sent her away.

By sheer fortune and distrust, the vicar enquired,
And so it was known, the man had lied.
Reports of a distant light, on that stormy night came in,
Led a search to the mine, where lost child was found.

So the man had fled, but the law followed close behind,
Even across the vast channel, he could not evade his fate.
In chains he was brought back, to face his shameful crime,
And so he was despatched by rope, the hanging man.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:44 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Alex Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:28 AM
A beautifully narrated poem in free verse. Keep writing. Wish to read more from you.
M  Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 12:18 AM
Wow Rebecca what a riveting ,well written poem. I so enjoyed it. Debx
Alderson Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thank you Deb, I appreciate you feedback :)
Mcconnell Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 8:31 AM
A rather moving piece Rebecca with nice imagery and insightful expression too. I don't know if this is historically true but you've told it excellently. Great to meet fellow brit here on PS, I'm north of the border. Have a great day though its dark now. Gordon
Alderson Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Gordon. It's inspired by true events. The Hanging Man was called William Burgess, and he lived in Simonsbath in Somerset. You'll find more information via Google, if you're interested.
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