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There once was a special broom It was fast and named the Zoom Taken by a witch Then left in a ditch She broke wind and went kaboom October 9, 2020 Halloween Inspired Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Syllable count: 7,7,5,5,7 (PS)

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/20/2020 10:00:00 PM

So glad to hear your wife's negative. Main tension over. In India they opened school in one state, not a single kid went. Take care, enjoy your day. Rama

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/21/2020 4:33:00 PM

I am as well, we both are at a higher risk I guess. I appreciate your concern. Stay safe and bless you my friend!

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 10/20/2020 6:30:00 PM

What a fun limerick!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/21/2020 4:32:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer, I'm glad you liked it.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 10/20/2020 7:41:00 AM

What a great lim, Mark, and congrats for your number one rating! Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob H

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 9:50:00 AM

Thank you very much Robert! I greatly appreciate that!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/20/2020 6:58:00 AM

Read your kid's are down with covid in the comments section of your Trump Limerick. I could understand your concern and worry. Glad to hear that all is well with you and your family. Take care, warm regards Rama

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 9:50:00 AM

Brittany still can taste but they are feeling pretty good. My wife tested negative so we are good. Thank you very much.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2020 2:10:00 AM

A very cute limerick, Mark. Congrats on your top win!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Carolyn!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 10/19/2020 9:02:00 PM

Congratulations Mark and thanks. Actually was not planning to participate as we don't have halloween in India. No idea about it. Then I read your entry saw we can write about witch and rest is history. Take care, Have a great day. Hope all's well at home. Warm regards Rama

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:35:00 AM

All is well here, Thank you Rama. Stay safe.

Carol Mitra

Date: 10/19/2020 7:27:00 PM

That's went boom....haha...good one Mark, Congrats on your win :)

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:35:00 AM

Thank you Carol!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/19/2020 4:54:00 PM

Your last line fueled your big win in the contest, Mark! lol. Congrats! :) Gershon

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:34:00 AM

Indeed, Thanks Gershon!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2020 3:54:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan!!

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/19/2020 2:31:00 PM

Well done on your first place winner, Mark.

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:33:00 AM

Thank you Jenna, I appreciate that!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/19/2020 12:40:00 PM

Funny Mark. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:33:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/19/2020 12:17:00 PM

Mark, congratulations on your first place win with your hilarious limerick made me belly laugh!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/20/2020 5:32:00 AM

Thank you for your generous placement Tania! It was a fun one for me.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/11/2020 3:05:00 AM

Hilarious. Such a good one :)

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/11/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you Regina I appreciate that!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/10/2020 12:04:00 PM

Clever and original, best wishes for the contest, Mark!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/11/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Michelle!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/9/2020 3:48:00 PM

Riding on the jet stream again Mark! This is funny, colorful and quite odiferous. Seems there are little pieces of which witch everywhere! Best of luck in the contest my friend along with harvest blessings!

Mark Koplin
Date: 10/10/2020 7:45:00 AM

Thanks Sam!