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The Guy In Aisle Nine

“Anyone who isn't embarrassed of who they were last year probably isn't learning enough.” — Alain de Botton
convinced me to roll curlers let them hang loose roam the village grocery store bobbing along latent style and jeans wouldn’t mind the stares if but i could restore my youth shake my booty oh so fine to the chagrin of my grandmother’s eyes to the surprise of the guy in aisle nine who thought me shy 3/23/2020

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Date: 3/28/2020 8:14:00 PM
Was that Michelle Number Nine? Is your Dad still active?
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Date: 3/28/2020 12:46:00 PM
Each year brings to mind more to be embarrassed at in retrospect, but more resilience to shyness in the present. This poem strikes a chord even to one of different gender. Brilliant title and well crafted writing, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Geoffrey, for saying so.
Date: 3/26/2020 11:49:00 AM
'Shake my booty - restore my youth - your photo screams youth - so sure you shook your booty very well indeed - a sprinkle of a naughtiness makes the poem perfect. Lovely write, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2020 3:04:00 PM
LOL, thanks!
Date: 3/24/2020 4:53:00 PM
I did so enjoy this write Kim Well said!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2020 5:22:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/24/2020 10:41:00 AM
You are too much, Kim: 'Shaking your booty,' indeed!...Great quote about embarrassment too. Take care now, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2020 5:22:00 PM
LOL...have to write something to chase away the boredom. :)
Date: 3/23/2020 5:44:00 PM
You don't have to shake it. There is an old song called In those Jeans by Ginuwine. Put'em on and just walk.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 6:13:00 PM
LOL...love it! :)
Date: 3/23/2020 3:15:00 PM
Still in the show...Youth is fantastic...but beauty never grows old, even with curls...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 6:13:00 PM
:) Thanks, Arturo
Date: 3/23/2020 2:25:00 PM
Kim, sweet, I recall my mother going to the grocery store in curlers, she thought nothing of it but as a teen I was horrified, one time she picked me up after work in her nightgown (well at least she was in the car) I like your poem a lot _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thanks so much and thanks for sharing your memory with me! My visiting Grandma rolled my hair and convinced me to go to the store...only time I did that. But such things stick in our memories :)
Date: 3/23/2020 1:02:00 PM
Creatively woven Kim! Thanks for your last comment on my poem. Stay bless!!! Love and hugs!!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs...Kim
Date: 3/23/2020 11:22:00 AM
Good one Kim. What a way you have with words!))) Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 11:24:00 AM
Thanks! :)
Date: 3/23/2020 10:12:00 AM
Haha! Light hearted withjust enough of naughtiness to give it spice! / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 10:16:00 AM
LOL wink wink
Date: 3/23/2020 10:08:00 AM
It sounds like fun Kim< we sure need some carefree booty shaken' right now!! Happy Monday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 10:22:00 AM
LOL...right?!
Date: 3/23/2020 10:08:00 AM
Whoa! "Swimmers"! Never thought of that, but then I'm not a female. You are clever, Kim. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2020 10:22:00 AM
LOL, Maurice! :)

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