The Guard of the White Mansion

Oh ho! Hairstyle of hers has changed!

So different she looks today; mature and confident.

I like it. But oh! Her long old long tresses, I do miss...

Gaze I do, at her shining face, everyday

But I'm sad; look me into the eyes, she never does!

Strange, she does bow to me in prayer every morning

and hope of mine is sustained with her rare glimpses, up.

Her kohl lined eyes and quivering lips tell her mood….

In glittering gold and exciting red palanquin, it was... 

The gate of this lovely mansion, she did cross.

Not without paying homage to me, the historical guard.

I longed to be the first to see the bride to rule here.

Alas! dutiful veils hide her...then, one was teased by a gust;

An elegant jewel clad hand came to grasp it and

A radiant face lifted momentarily towards the sky

And disappeared as quickly.... I was enchanted.

So lovely… a real queen who would adorn my white mansion.

Next day, she came blooming to the yard temple

For her first day prayer… a woman complete….

Oh ho! Those tresses, long and humid; her tightened sari…

And the sparkles of love and happiness on her bubbly face…

I decided to guard her from that day, praying she blooms forever.

A year now, my wish has been granted, she is as luminous.

But I do hope she looks into my aggressive tiger face, once!


8/08/17
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January 13, 2019 at 1:41 PM
Wonderful poem Sunita..
U.D Palawon  Avatar
January 20, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Thanks friend...god bless u.
Smith Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 9:08 PM
This one has got me thinking and asking questions about changing to please others., when we are not sure of their tastes, desires for and of us. Excellent write. Best regards David
Johnson Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Thanks, Sunita, for comments on "Dear Jupiter". Guard of the White Mansion, very creative and interesting. Blessings. Curtis.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thanks for the like and your poems was a pleasure to read. All the best :) Sunita
Downing  Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 12:29 PM
One of my fave from you Sunita. Absolutely beautiful :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thanks for honoring me with this choice, Akkina. Thanks for the read and appreciation. All the best in life. :) Sunita
Deo Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 8:44 PM
If it is your daughter-in-law, this is really well said. Great mix of tradition and love/admiration. Blessings, DEONILS
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 3:01 AM
Actually, It's from the POV of the tiger statue guarding the gate of the mansion...thanks for the visit. Regards Sunita.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:36 PM
What an interesting character study of this guard who can only see her from a small distance. You describe the woman beautifully.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 1:17 AM
Thanks Andrea for reading my poems and for the valuable comment. It does inspire me a lot. All the best! :) Sunita
Andresen Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 4:47 AM
- I was also enchanted by this great and interesting poem, Sunita - Beautiful written - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Thanks dearest friend for your kind visit and ever encouraging comment. Hugs Sunita :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Excellent portrait. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 4:34 AM
Thanks for the visit and the appreciation. All the best. :) Sunita
Williams Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 1:37 AM
This is a beautiful personification Sunita. I really got caught up in the story line and wanted more. Do tell......Maria
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 6:35 AM
:D...i'm so touched by your visit and comment. There numerous twist to the story. In time I may continue. Thanks lot. Regs Sunita :)
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