The Grief of Losing a Child

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I weep for days, weeks, or longer. Tears flow quickly anyway, and the sob clinger. Crying proceeds when tears cease. I have been feeling my squat angel for weeks. I clutch sacred trust to hope against my will. I'm keen on detecting her tone and feeling her quill. People's memories are starting to wane. However, I abide on battling with fierce pain. Consistently, you actually tell me to "rest tight." You could actually toss a kiss once at night. So every time I wake up in the morning, Once again, it is my heart that is mourning. Now by gone will I be a complete person. Just proceed and hide. The agony will worsen. Written: August 12, 2022 The Epiphany That Changed Your Life Forever Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/13/2022 10:10:00 AM
So sad and heart wrenching Lasaad. Indeed the memories continue to return. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of peace to you!
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Date: 9/6/2022 10:51:00 PM
Indeed, heartrending. Losing one's very own is unbearable though we try our best to forget. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/17/2022 4:55:00 PM
Painful to read of the hurt and suffering because of loss. Well written my friend. Thanks for sharing the strong emotions of the experience with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/13/2022 5:35:00 AM
Emotive expressions my friend. Grief always tugs the heart.
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Date: 8/13/2022 12:44:00 AM
This is indeed very sad and I hope it's fiction. To lose a child!!!!!! I dare not even think of it.
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Date: 8/12/2022 8:41:00 PM
I can sense the intensity of the pain a parent feels at the loss of a child and it is poignantly depicted here. The deep heaviness one feels after having shed every drop of tear is bitter when the eyes go dry. I understand, it is fictional....yet the reader can feel it as so real. Great penning, dear friend.
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Date: 8/12/2022 3:01:00 PM
Sotto, nothing could be as bad as losing a child, weep as long as it takes to see you smile. Though smiles can’t hide a broken heart, they may stop one falling apart… Blessings, Belle
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Date: 8/14/2022 3:36:00 PM
You write with conviction Sotto, I’m pleased to know this is a fictional write… Belle
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Date: 8/12/2022 3:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Belle. I appreciate your kind words and I'm glad that you like this poem with its sorrow and grief, but it's fictional writing for the contest. Best Regards and I hope hubby and you are doing well, have a great weekend.
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