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The Grey Morning

the morning in grey the oozing inter faith wounds all hibiscus shut March 30, 2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2018 12:39:00 PM

- To me this feels sad, Probir - ... it smells a bit dead - Excellent written - Best wishes for a lovely Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/30/2018 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine ....

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/30/2018 10:44:00 AM

I see it vividly, Probir. Wonderful haiku!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/30/2018 11:48:00 AM

Almost out of the blue your positive comment as always ... what a pleasure ... yes, the sights and sounds at certain places around us are painful ... an angst to believe the incivility of the politicians ... is it 1918 or 2018? ... we have to doubt ...

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/29/2018 11:26:00 PM

A classic, reminiscent of the masters!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/30/2018 11:53:00 AM

Thank you .... I consider myself a pigmy haiku writer ...