The Greatest Performance of My Life

The greatest performance of my life
        was the day I married my sweet love of my soul. 
           His arms sheltered me from the outside world. 

     The greatest performance of my life 
        was the sequence of events that made me whole. 
           The birth of my sons, moments that made love strong. 

     The cheerful, awe feeling, when they wobbled taking their first steps. 
        The tears that dripped watching them go up the steps 
           on their first day of school. 
     The swelling and proud feelings in my heart
        watching them reach for their diploma on graduations. 

     The exciting experience of a new parent, when they had their children. 

     The greatest performance of my life,
         the accomplishments, God continues blessing.



6/5/2022

The Greatest Performance Of My Life Poetry Contest
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Peck Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:15 PM
Lovely poem, Eve. Yes, I think raising our children is our best performance. Congrats!
Watt Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:08 PM
I'm a little misty eyed reading your poem, Eve. I love that your greatest accomplishments are your wedding and the milestones of your sons. I feel the motherly pride and gratitude shining through. Congrats and hugs ~ John
Roper Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, John, yes my husband , boys, and grandchildren were my waterfall of noise and beauty.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Romios Avatar
June 9, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Too beautiful, not to love this Eve. Best wishes! Panagiota
Baker Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Lovely poem, Eve. A tribute to motherhood. :-) I like the way you think. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Good luck in the contest!
Rose  Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 3:45 PM
You have had many great performances, my dear. Yes life has such meaning when we are loved and give love, Your must is alive and well dear friend, love you xo
Agustin Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 10:57 PM
Thanks for sharing this... making me grateful to the Lord for allowing me to have you as my friend. Indeed, I delight in this "The greatest performance of my life, the accomplishments, God continues blessing." Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Eve, thank you for sharing such a thoughtful poem with us. such a heartfelt ode to your children and hubby in this wonderful gesture.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 5:41 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Blessing friend
Buhagiar Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:42 AM
Your bio is so familiar to me. I've read so many of your poems and remarks.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 5:42 PM
Awe, thank you, Victor. Blessings dear friend
Hawkins Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 2:20 AM
How can you wish for more. The greatest performance, with the best results. Blessings, Shirley.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Shirley, family is everything. Blessings
Hankins Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 6:42 PM
A loving tribute to your husband and your children. I enjoyed it very much, Eve.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Milt. Blessings dear friend
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