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The Greatest Performance of My Life

A small desire like a spark, I do not know lit from where, Frenzy of becoming an orator in me did flair; I watched often, like blackbirds, seldom shutting my eye-lids, Each speech of great orators, staying solid like lipids...! It's time to perform - said well-wishers, relatives and friends, Good-time was what all waited for anxieties to cleanse; I was then a little boy just reaching adolescence, Emotions and feelings had invaded my common-sense...! There came, as though the final judgment, the appointed day, I was ready, on our school stage, to perform my best way; All applauded, as I entered the stage very happy, Why this tremor? Why blankness of mind? Why heart goes flabby...? Many laughed, howled and hooted; my kith and kin stood perplexed; I left the dais, like a lunatic, humbled and vexed; Pain of shame, like bark scorpion, my internals did sting, Despair and frustration within, like eagles, did spread wing...! I went dumbstruck and plunged into a cave of silence, Knowing, my people left me to my inner violence; That I come out, like a lion, courageous and robust, Excel in performance, full of self-confidence and trust...! What clicked, then, exactly, I still verily do not know, Was it the resolve within that like flood of lava, flow? My oration out-poured like a cloudburst, thunderously, In this art, now, I shine like Sirius star, wondrously...! 31 May 2022 The Greatest Performance of My Life Poetry Contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul

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Date: 7/14/2022 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on overcoming nerves with tenacity! I admire those who seem to speak with ease before crowds. Good for you! Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/13/2022 10:31:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your great performance( finally you did it0, this awesome write and especially,your shining win my dear friend! It reminded me when I was young trying to overcome a stage fear, however it worsen when I grew up so i just put into writing :). Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Date: 7/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/13/2022 9:27:00 PM
To be able to hold the audience spell bound through rhetoric is a rare ability and you have mastered it ! Congratulations on your first place win, Chris!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/13/2022 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. Love your ending. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/23/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/22/2022 3:43:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, really enjoyed your great poem. You reminded me of my introvert and shy personality at a young age - until I promised to myself to overcome that fear! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2022 6:29:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/9/2022 5:42:00 PM
Bravo....great poem...nothing to fear but fear itself
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/13/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 6/6/2022 1:50:00 AM
We all get nervous the first time we speak to an audience, I now enjoy doing so. I’m pleased you found the courage to do likewise. A delightful read Chisturaj… Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2022 6:21:00 AM
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Date: 6/1/2022 5:29:00 AM
Oh I can so well relate ! You have expressed in an arresting way your initial 'mishap' and how you emerged as phoenix from the ashes of defeat... I too got rid of my early stage fright ! By the time i entered High school, I became a confident speaker ! In my teaching career in the college, the authorities used to entrust me to do the presentations. Beautifully composed Chris.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/1/2022 6:50:00 AM
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Date: 5/31/2022 7:20:00 AM
Wow! What a great story and achieved performance! I enjoyed this :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/31/2022 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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