Get Your Premium Membership

The Great White Pumpkin

The Great White Pumpkin By Dane Smith-Johnsen Ghostly Pumpkin dull and white Plans to give a ghastly fright. Rough and tough his wrinkled skin Mesmerizing twenty men. Soon “Big Buddy” comes around. Cuts a circle in his crown. Jagged teeth and fearsome smile Eyes and eyebrows carved in style. Tasty innards scraped right out. “Where's my nose?” White Pumpkin shouts! Come on partner night grows dark. Time to start the candle's spark. Glowing eyes on front porch steps Watch young goblins full of pep. “Trick-or-Treat” the children chime. Great White Pumpkin sings in time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/24/2009 5:19:00 PM
Made me chuckle with lovely pumkin poem, good luck in Raul's contest >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2009 9:56:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much, Dane Ann. I can't seem to wipe the smile off my face.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2009 7:32:00 AM
Dane Ann ... this write is innovative and creative... good luck in Raul's contest.. I also have entered my poem ... thankxxx for commenting on my Captive winning poem ... the painting truly was an inspiration... as is your tale of the Great White Pumpkin... Linda-Marie
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2009 6:29:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2009 11:32:00 PM
Wonderful script! Good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2009 4:48:00 PM
Adorable..your on a roll..BG
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2009 3:39:00 PM
What a great pumpkin tale, you have spun, I have enjoyed the imagery flowing within the lines. I thank you for sharing the read and for your wonderful comments, Good Luck in Raul's contest :-) God Bless, Adell
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2009 2:09:00 PM
I LOVE THIS PUMPKIN POEM--TO YM FAV:)SO SWEET AS YOU,SWEET GOOD FRIEND--Charma
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2009 1:43:00 PM
Fun and delightful...a great new twist to Raul's contest!! Good luck! ~ Love, Carrie
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things