The Great Poet

She found me singing in the backwoods of Alabama bluegrass
                        Your voice is beautiful she said
                   A country gal molded from Georgia's red clay
                                 Fascinated with thoughts
                                  That flow from my mind
                       We use simple words to define rhythm
                 Written from the blood that flows through our hand 
                          Overlooking those that don't understand


She found me dancing in the empty streets of New Orleans
                               Recite a poem of passion
                                   What did she mean?
                               Look at the sky that is blue
                                 The clouds of white linen
                                  The world is full of love
                               And willing to die for anyone

She found me making love at the top of the mountain peak
                              Where love whispers
                             And words don't speak
                                 Minds stay tangled
                            And thoughts never sleep

                                She found me writing
                               But my soul still weeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rider Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 10:45 AM
LOVE the third verse! Magnificent! So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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September 8, 2009 at 5:32 PM
Andrew - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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September 8, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Congrat's Andrew for being featured this week...Raul
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September 8, 2009 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! well done! Laura :)
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September 7, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Powerful, poignant write here, Andrew and a well-deserved selection to be featured here at the Soup this week!! Congratulations!!
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September 7, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 12:15 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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September 7, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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September 7, 2009 at 6:46 AM
very thoughtful and true
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September 7, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Congratulations on a beautifully written featured poem. Keep writing. Sara
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September 7, 2009 at 5:35 AM
Andrew,...what a beautiful poem,...gentle ans every word so soft,..congratulations on your feature,..and its going in my favs !!! james
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September 7, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations, Andrew, on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read a poet's feelings in poetry like this. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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