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The Great Poet

She found me singing in the backwoods of Alabama bluegrass Your voice is beautiful she said A country gal molded from Georgia's red clay Fascinated with thoughts That flow from my mind We use simple words to define rhythm Written from the blood that flows through our hand Overlooking those that don't understand She found me dancing in the empty streets of New Orleans Recite a poem of passion What did she mean? Look at the sky that is blue The clouds of white linen The world is full of love And willing to die for anyone She found me making love at the top of the mountain peak Where love whispers And words don't speak Minds stay tangled And thoughts never sleep She found me writing But my soul still weeps

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 10:45:00 AM
LOVE the third verse! Magnificent! So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:32:00 PM
Andrew - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:29:00 PM
Congrat's Andrew for being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/8/2009 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! well done! Laura :)
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:28:00 PM
Powerful, poignant write here, Andrew and a well-deserved selection to be featured here at the Soup this week!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:15:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:46:00 AM
very thoughtful and true
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on a beautifully written featured poem. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:35:00 AM
Andrew,...what a beautiful poem,...gentle ans every word so soft,..congratulations on your feature,..and its going in my favs !!! james
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrew, on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read a poet's feelings in poetry like this. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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