The Great Atlantic Dawn

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The Great Atlantic Dawn Eastern clouds lie golden in the morning. Their wealth is the great Atlantic’s dawning. The risen sun will kiss horizon’s shore, and on to southern towns to touch much more. The joy of ocean’s ageless as blue skies, a power body stretched before our eyes. How great the grains of sand; so countless be, that form the earth which melts into the sea! The sun will rise and be a cherished sight, the calmness present from a booming night. We’ll dream and stroll the peaceful tidal shore, looking east toward new days to adore. 8/27/16

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Date: 10/18/2016 10:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Those days rising are wonderful..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/18/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks, Sara.
Date: 10/15/2016 8:23:00 PM
Great imagery. Congratulations!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/16/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thanks, Blessings, Janis.
Date: 10/15/2016 2:48:00 PM
Beautifully written, Janis. That second stanza is absolutely thrilling. Congratulations on your placement.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/15/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thanks, Paul.
Date: 10/15/2016 2:30:00 PM
Janis, thank you for participating in the contest. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/15/2016 3:58:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. I'm sure it was hard to judge.
Date: 8/29/2016 4:56:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem and I love the image too ~
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/29/2016 5:49:00 PM
Thanks, Broken Wings. Good idea for a contest. Must think on your new challenge.
Date: 8/29/2016 12:46:00 PM
Hi Janis, Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well: -)Alexis
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Date: 8/29/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis Y.
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