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The Gravedigger

He never did see a face though only a board width away, yet remembers feeling privileged, spending those last few moments while trying so hard to find the softer soil to lessen the impact upon the brass plated permanent encasement; in this final resting place. beneath the old oak neither sun nor moon perceived a veil of shadow He’s mindful of the susceptible sensation within when the last shovelful that completely covered the coffin tenderly placed, then the license to use the coarse fill of heavy clay and stoney soil. to become apart at one within holy ground the grass grows each spring A phenomenal pride when to barrow away the surplus soil, leaving the mound trim and tidy, a monument for the deceased; also a monument for him, his very first dig, all with his own hand. a mark of respect for three score years and nineteen entity forgone. © Harry J Horsman 2015

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Date: 5/7/2021 7:57:00 AM
To write about the gravedigger, soft in tone, serious at his job to give peace and right to a passed on soul. Nicely done, Harry!
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Date: 4/27/2021 8:55:00 AM
Such a kind poem. I had never before thought that the gravedigger is the last one to wish a safe journey. It's a lovely poem, Harry.
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Date: 10/16/2015 12:45:00 AM
I love this Harry :)
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:17:00 PM
Morning, or evening. Harry I'm going to send that tweet away, thanks for your ongoing support.
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Date: 8/22/2015 10:51:00 AM
Nice poem, Harry, unique subject.
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Date: 8/21/2015 10:08:00 AM
I like the sentimentality you've captured in this one. I also like a the relationship between the prose and haiku. A very special write. Thanks for entering it into my contest. I would like to tweet this one in my promotion campaign. I hope you don't mind.
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Date: 8/21/2015 11:23:00 AM
no problem Scott, thanks for the placing...
Date: 8/21/2015 1:45:00 AM
Congrats on wonderful win Harry with this amazing haibun!
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Date: 8/20/2015 8:30:00 PM
congrats on the win Harry. Very well written and unique take on the habit theme
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:34:00 PM
Harry, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:40:00 PM
Harry, congratulations on your win and a 7 the image you have great you have brought to life in this peace. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/20/2015 12:20:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2015 11:50:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats harry:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2015 10:45:00 AM
Praise to the grave diggers of by gone time... I hope when it was his turn to be laid to rest... Someone gave him such respect... The visuals and turn of phrases were very touching.
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Date: 7/27/2015 6:53:00 AM
Harry, thanks for stopping' by! wow! this is heavy with a richness like a fine Amish Quilt (visiting next wkend w/Ma!) the feelings of the "digger" you really immerse the reader.....I worked in a "prominent" (overlooking a city lake...expensive acreage) cemetery in high school helpin' a "grave-mucker"(graves before WW2 wood-liners) nasty business....bones float up etc....the old guy kept aloof of the whole job, but i know he hit the tavern on the way home....jimbo
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Date: 7/27/2015 5:41:00 AM
I like this poem. It is able to deliver the honorable aspect of a sensitive subject and the hard work of a conscientious member of society. Truly there is poetry in everything. You've shown me that today. Thank you. A 7. Kim
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Date: 7/26/2015 5:42:00 PM
an exceptional write handled with great sensitivity Harry hugs
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:16:00 PM
I think of gravediggers as caretakers, who look after the cemetery and the loved ones who are buried there. A very respectable and honorable profession... Your poem gives us a unique insight on him. An excellent write, Harry! Its a fave for me :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 2:43:00 AM
I absolutely love this poem. Great job! Always, Laura
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:33:00 PM
Well crafted dark write Harry.. I enjoyed the read!
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Date: 7/23/2015 8:00:00 AM
I thought I would give this another read, yep still creepy in a good way.
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Date: 7/22/2015 9:03:00 PM
A delicate write on a sensitive subject. Well done. Thank for your comments on my poem. I am slowly trying to get back to normal. Love. Joyce
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
There is a sense of respect for the dead, and an appreciation of life, as well, in this great haibun group of poems, Harry. Great write, and hope it does very well in the contest.
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Date: 7/22/2015 3:12:00 PM
there is pride and sensitivity in all works of live. I asked a friend, Luke Allen, what gave him goose bumps. I mentioned a great work of music. Luke, a brick layer, said, "I get the biggest thrill from laying a nice tight wall. Love, daver
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Date: 7/22/2015 10:59:00 AM
A man who fought and sacrificed for his Nation along with other fighters now are given phenomenal respect in trim and tidy monument. A poem of great dedication by respecting to the Nation. Beautifully done my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:12:00 PM
Yes, Harry, please do soupmail me and tell me about those grave digging days!! I kind of recall you mentioning it before!
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