The Grave

The cabin.
Gaunt and weathered
was the grave.
The old man
crying inside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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George   Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:57 AM
An extremely powerful and visual Tanka.
Henderson Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Thank you Elaine
Gorelick Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Very moving, BG
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January 27, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Thanks, Barbara.
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