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the grave

The cabin. Gaunt and weathered was the grave. The old man crying inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2016 12:57:00 AM
An extremely powerful and visual Tanka.
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Charles Henderson
Date: 1/30/2016 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Elaine
Date: 1/26/2016 10:42:00 PM
Very moving, BG
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Charles Henderson
Date: 1/27/2016 12:40:00 AM
Thanks, Barbara.