The Grandeur of Fall

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November 19, 2023

Contest : The Grandeur Of Fall

Sponsored by : Emile Pinet

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The fleet of silver fringed cloud floats away across ashen sea of end-summer sky. The beguiled birds bathe in the blue of bay, as fall arrives with hued pace on the sly. The meadow wears the crown of diamond dew, flickers with the finesse of dawn’s dream glow. Lining the cinnabar garden path new, the tawny trees shed bronze leaves rustling slow. The setting sun sets fire in serene sky, makes cosmic collage of red ember bright. In its shimmer my spirit ascends high, the gleam of golden milieu wraps my sight. In autumn night the sprouting stars I see drizzle silver dust with aura of glee.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/16/2023 8:03:00 AM

I love the silvery sheen of this write Subimal. Congratulations! :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2023 6:32:00 AM

Many thanks, Linda for liking the poem.

Terry Miller

Date: 12/16/2023 3:33:00 AM

This is a wonderful sonnet full of fabulous imagery; congratulations

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/17/2023 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/15/2023 7:04:00 PM

Such a charming sonnet, Subimal: Congratulations on your placement. SuZ

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/15/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thank you, Suzanne.

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2023 1:58:00 PM

Excellent sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/15/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thank you. Yours is excellent.

Emile Pinet

Date: 12/15/2023 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Subimal! Your Autumn poem "The Grandeur of Fall," has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 12/15/2023 9:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Emile for the placement, and for your encouraging comment.