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November 19, 2023

Contest : The Grandeur Of Fall

Sponsored by : Emile Pinet

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The Grandeur of Fall


The fleet of silver fringed cloud floats away across ashen sea of end-summer sky. The beguiled birds bathe in the blue of bay, as fall arrives with hued pace on the sly. The meadow wears the crown of diamond dew, flickers with the finesse of dawn’s dream glow. Lining the cinnabar garden path new, the tawny trees shed bronze leaves rustling slow. The setting sun sets fire in serene sky, makes cosmic collage of red ember bright. In its shimmer my spirit ascends high, the gleam of golden milieu wraps my sight. In autumn night the sprouting stars I see drizzle silver dust with aura of glee.
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Fowler Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 8:03 AM
I love the silvery sheen of this write Subimal. Congratulations! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Many thanks, Linda for liking the poem.
Miller Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 3:33 AM
This is a wonderful sonnet full of fabulous imagery; congratulations
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 17, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging comments.
Delaney Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 7:04 PM
Such a charming sonnet, Subimal: Congratulations on your placement. SuZ
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Suzanne.
One Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 1:58 PM
Excellent sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in Emiles contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you. Yours is excellent.
Pinet Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations Subimal! Your Autumn poem "The Grandeur of Fall," has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily earned a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much, Emile for the placement, and for your encouraging comment.
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