The Gracious

One little sunflower alone among many headless stems poses by my mailbox. Some summers ago, others flourished there, but were all mown down. If they can forgive their being slain, perhaps they will resurge and rejoin her. Today as I back my car out onto the street, I chance to glance over where that one new flower has remained, and I see, to my delight, that the lone sunflower has brilliantly turned into a small and gracious group of three! for the Encounters with Flowers Poetry contest
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Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Andrea, lovely poem, I'm still looking for your quadruple. What is called?
Zerbst Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 11:43 AM
This form looks like a real challenge. Truly enjoyed the story, and the words are suited impeccably to the form as always. I like how it says "as I backed my car" instead of talking about something in the past. Makes it more alive. P.S. Have your read my Celena poems? I remember wanting to know what you thought of how I did with the really long narrative type.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 2:10 AM
I enjoyed this one Andrea, visualizing the three sisters standing together against metal of the mower!
Sirak Avatar
December 2, 2014 at 6:11 AM
This is wonderful! So descriptive, that one sunflower surrounded by remnants or maybe ghosts of other flowers. I think this should have won.
Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Very creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Some of them seem to survive despite what happens to try to snuff them out..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I like the way snow and ice crackle when melting in the sun..I haven't heard that sound but a few time in my life for we don't get much snow and ice..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 11:09 AM
thanks. A winner it was not. Sure loved that cackle line.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 5:37 PM
beautifully crafted andrea golden pen dear friend
Austin Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 9:58 AM
Love this spinning top design and the message too. You are so, soooooo clever, dear Andrea. Love, daver
Yvonne Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 7:11 AM
Love it! It's a fav.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Nature never betrays its goals. A beautiful and tender Etheree worthy of claiming victory dear, Andrea! Good luck!
Anish Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have had some bad luck with plants recently. I gave my zinnias too much plant food. My aloe vera plant is doing quite well. Nice tribute to Mother Nature. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Yvonne Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 7:37 PM
By the time you get back from where you were going maybe there will be nine.
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 9:10 PM
As I recall, they did not grow more than that, but maybe I remember wrong. It happened a long time ago. This poem is from maybe ten years ago.
Enriquez Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Dear Andrea: Nicely done. What a cheery poem, and reflective too! Enjoyed. All the best then, Leon.
Curtis Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 6:36 AM
Just one word---WOW
De La Luna Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 2:26 AM
wow! i could see the sunflowers, Andrea! beautiful write!
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:51 PM
wonderful Andrea such a delight to read gl in contest hugs
O.J. Hunt Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Wonderfully penned Andrea
Smith Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Just don't mow them down again...I love the theme here Andrea..hugs Tim
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 8:43 PM
I certainly did not mow them down. haha!!! My husband thinks they are weeds. It makes me so pissed!!!
Chircop Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 4:21 PM
What a sweet ending to this beautiful floral blossoming poem.
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 3:07 PM
so beautifully penned Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Meade Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 2:36 PM
The shape of the poem rises to the sun and sinks to drink deeply of the hidden waters. A holy trinity!! Hey, where is the kimchee planted . . . in the backyard by the septic tank?
Fleming Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Nicely done, Andrea. You have a keen eye. :)
Bateman Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 1:33 PM
Hello Andrea, A very nice Etheree write indeed!! I think you should do very well in the contest with this one. Best of Luck!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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