The Golden Bowl

Pages pour from an
Open mind…or wound
Editing a lifes
Moments 

I’ve heard it is fabricated
of good deeds 
                        ……cemented with good works.

I often pondered this
as I was taught
“the reward for doing good
                                            ……..is doing good”

I’d settle for
a one bedroom cloud condo
                                            ……….with a view of the “throne” 

10/16/2021

The Throne in Heaven Poetry Contest
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Romios Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Very Good, Law! Pangie
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 7:44 PM
"Vintage J. Lawless" with a hard uppercut to finish it off. Love it, gw
Lawless Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Gershon, my mother used to tell me that "I was two kinds of good....no good.....and good for nothing"
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 2:28 AM
Lol. Ah yes a cloud condo WOULD be nice. Charming write.
Lawless Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 3:34 PM
Well, there may be "many mansions" but I ain't been that good.....
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