The Gods of Winds

A warring god of wind storms and lightening,
Rudra, rough looking, well built, braided hair
Golden in color, of firm limbs widening
With streaks of lightening and fearful blares
Making nervous with fear all the beings.
But caters medicines to the world with care
The wind God is the breath bringer to all
Perfumes, caresses and senses at his call.

Rudra sired his wife Deeti with a son
Deeti vowed to keep him in her womb for more years
Letting the child be more and more brawny one.
Indra, the chief deity of heaven, out of fear,
Entered her womb and chopped him with passion
But pieces so strong reformed into numbers. 
They were named as Maruts, varied Gods of wind
Who lash the world from end to end with great dins.

They are progeny of Rudra, the bulls of heaven,
Radiant in serried rank free from spots and stains
Who drench the earth with heavy rains uneven.
No one know from where they take shape and rain
Spreading forth darkness during the day time even.
Bring health and wealth in noisy way, but veterans.
*"The winds of God’s grace are always blowing
It is left to us how to set the sails flowing."

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*Rudra, Maruts and Deeti are characters in Hindu Mythology*
* Inspired by a quote
December 21, 2014
Third Place win
Form: Ottava Rima - Rhyme Scheme abababcc, dededeff, ghghghii
Sources : Wikipedia - hinduwebsites
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Love this, dear friend.. Congrats on a great win. I could read the first stanza over and over.. Also fav the ending quote.. Hugs.. Arlene
A. Sharma Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:00 PM
Wonderful write Dr. Ram! Congrats on top place win with ur write on Rudra! Wish u a very happy new year !
A   Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Dr Ram, Congrats on your win... Linda :
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:49 PM
You got in a lot of good stories about the gods of winds with yours. Congrats on a great win.
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 7:22 PM
hows the view from up in the #1 group, congratulations on another fine poem Dr. M
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. Very informative and well-written. Sandra
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Well done and many congrats and best wishes Dr ram xx
Ebbs Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Congrats Doc, Good Job :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Based on Hindu Mythology...great poem. Congrats on win. Regards Mehtasaab> Rajat
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 10:59 AM
so beautifully flowing with great description and detail - many congrats :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Schumacker Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Very descriptive. Nicely done. I particularly like the wording, "drench the Earth with heavy rains uneven." I think uneven rains are great. Congratulations on your excellent win. Happy New Year! Earl
May Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Congrats on a great win Dr Ram...Happy New Year
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 4:22 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Dr. Ram....huggs
Hamilton Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 2:15 AM
congrats on 1st Ram well researched and written ty for your support hugs
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 6:08 AM
Thanks, Shadow and wish you all the best of 2015
Boardman Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Dr Ram for this insight into the God of Wind.
May Avatar
December 23, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Very nicely penned ...I like the way you ended it....Merry Christmas to you Dr Ram
Andresen Avatar
December 22, 2014 at 5:01 AM
- Dr. Ram my friend, a very beautiful poem - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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