The Gods of Summer

I looked through all my words
and oh, how absurd
I couldn't find a single one
about Summertime!

The time of Amon and Ai is coming you know,
even though I have mixed feelings
about skin peelings
and heat to take a breath away.

Summertime is for children
to splash and run in bare feet.
In the fall/winter of my life
I creak about in bones
that welcome warmth but not heat.

Horae turns the seasons
(without my permission)
while in Spring I long to stay,
so I wait in awe of the god's decision
to roast me come what may.


               For John Heck's Summertime Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/9/2009 3:12:00 AM
Nice work, best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 8:01:00 PM
Good luck in the finals!! Two poems!!! Congrats. Vince
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Sue! This is such a woderfully written piece and I wish you the best of luck in the finals! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:33:00 AM
Sue, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:56:00 AM
Congrats 2u on your 2 poems making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:24:00 PM
Yay Sue!!! Congrats on your two well deserved poems making it through!!! Good luck in the finals! Big hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:45:00 AM
I guess I didn't make the cut in your blog but I will join you in the 2's category:) Congradulations Sue. This is a very pretty poem. I'm sure it won John Heck's contest and I'm sure it will win PS.
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:16:00 PM
Sue, somehow I missed this one. Very well done, and so full of images of summer's come and gone. Congratulations on having two of your pieces make it to the next round! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:09:00 PM
Way to go, Sue! Two poems making it through the first round deserve a double congratulations. Good luck! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:22:00 PM
Sue, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:24:00 AM
Well done,Sue best wishes in the next rounds with your poems.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:41:00 PM
Delightful little poem about summer, I feel the same way the older I get! Congratulations on being featured!! ~*~Trudy~*~
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:50:00 PM
Interesting perspective and good use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. A second honor for this well written piece. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/3/2009 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week Sue . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:21:00 AM
And you portrayed the summer months well friend.....Congrats on the feature......:JP]
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Date: 8/3/2009 9:18:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/3/2009 8:36:00 AM
Hi Sue I do hope that your summer has been blessed - wonderful to read your words again hon - God Bless, YF4L, MJ
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:22:00 AM
Sue,..this is truly a great summer poem ! The summer is trully not my favorite time of year,..not where I live at least,..I'm a fall, winter, spring fellow,..and I suffer the summer for those beautiful flowers !!! Congrats on this awesome poem being featured this week ! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 7:21:00 AM
Sue,..this is truly a great summer poem ! The summer is trully not my favorite time of year,..not where I live at least,..I'm a fall, winter, spring fellow,..and I suffer the summer for those beautiful flowers !!! Congrats on this awesome poen being featured this week ! james
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Date: 8/3/2009 4:30:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured Sue>>James
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Date: 8/2/2009 11:57:00 PM
Congrats on your feature write today Sue.Rgds Brian.
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Date: 5/27/2009 7:23:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner in Johns contest, a lovely written piece...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/24/2009 7:18:00 AM
Warmest congrats Sue on your most excellent win in John's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/23/2009 6:16:00 PM
Terrific summertime poem!! Congratulations, Sue, for your win in John's contest !!! Great job!
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Date: 4/26/2009 4:05:00 PM
LOL! Got quite a few chuckles out of this one Sue. Very clever and fun! Thanks for your congrats on Elixir :-D
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