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The Glitch in the Grid

The telescreens hummed their endless drone, A symphony of truth alone, Dictated, printed, beamed so wide, Where independent thought had died. Newspeak choked the rebel tongue, And every sunrise sadly sung The praises of the watchful eye, Beneath a manufactured sky. For years, the iron fist had held, A narrative so tightly spelled, That doubt became a whispered fear, A phantom banished, held nowhere near. The Party’s truth, a seamless lie, Reflected in each vacant eye. Winston’s ghost, a fading stain, A testament to futile pain. But even in the perfect weave, A single thread can disbelieve. Not in grand revolt’s bold call, Nor angels tumbling over the wall. The crack began in Sector Seven, A data stream sent up to heaven, Or rather, to the Ministry of Plenty’s core, Where numbers ruled and nothing more. A junior coder, Unit 734, Whose days were grey, and future poor, Found an anomaly, a flicker bright, A statistical error in the night. The grain harvests, always grand, Showed a subtle, shifting sand. Not outright lies, but gentle bends, To meet the ever-shifting trends Of quotas set, impossibly high, Beneath the omnipresent sky. He didn’t question the decree, Just sought the source of discrepancy. He traced the lines, the digital flow, Through layers deep, where secrets grow. He found not malice, not design, But simple human error’s sign. A tired worker, late one night, Had transposed figures in the light. That tiny glitch, a random seed, Began a chain the Party wouldn’t heed. For truth, they thought, was ironclad, A fortress built, no weakness had. But data, pure and cold and stark, Revealed a hairline in the dark. Another coder, in a different zone, Observed a similar pattern shown In fabrication outputs, subtly skewed, The perfect system slightly crude. No grand conspiracy unfurled, Just isolated facts, a different world Peeking through the fabricated screen, A hint of what had never been. These small discrepancies, unseen, Began to breed a silent “mean.” Statisticians, heads bowed low, Saw patterns that the numbers show, Not of rebellion, fierce and bold, But of a story left untold. The Party’s power, built on lies, Depended on unwavering eyes. But when the numbers wouldn’t fit, A tiny seed of doubt was lit. Not in the hearts, initially, But in the cold machinery. The system, built on perfect truth, Contained the fragile seeds of sooth. For totalitarianism’s might, Lies in the crushing of all light, In making every fact align, With the dictated, single line. But reality, in its messy way, Has glitches that will find the day. A transposed digit, a flawed report, Can open up a tiny port. And through that crack, so small and slight, A different kind of truth took flight. Not Winston’s spirit, crushed and gone, But the cold, hard logic carrying on. The numbers whispered, soft and low, A truth the Party couldn’t know. That even in a world controlled, Reality cannot be bought and sold. The glitch in the grid, the flawed design, Unravelled the one, unwavering line. And in the silence that ensued, A different future could intrude.

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Date: 4/12/2025 10:11:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 4/10/2025 7:04:00 AM
Veronica, your entry is an incredibly thought-provoking piece. Excellent. Congratulations on your contest placement...I enjoyed reading... Mickey G :)
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Date: 4/9/2025 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win - wonderful write - welcome to PS - can't wait to read more of your work - Sean
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Date: 4/9/2025 5:20:00 PM
This your first poem, oh my! Congratulations on your top win, Veronica! ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 4/9/2025 3:41:00 PM
Congrats on your placement! And your first submission here on PS? Woohoo. Hey this was amazing in its simplicity. Little by little an unraveling of lies leads to Big Brother's downfall. You didn't give us the climax, just the lit fuse. Kudos to #734. Extraordinary
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