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The Glass Sea

The tide stroked at my toes. It reminded me how… gentle Your touch used to be. A gilded sun enveloped the glass sea, Glistening; the way your Eyes lit a darkened room. Waves,              Crashed. Semi-translucent images Come and go on a waning tide Ebbing as only life itself can To remind me that tomorrow There will be no kiss…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Date: 8/23/2022 7:05:00 AM
“Tear”!! What a wonderful write!! Pulls ever so achingly at my heart!! Well done!!! I’m still here across the pond!! Lol! I have missed you! I hope you too are well!! Big hugs and love!! Cap’n deb
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Date: 9/11/2021 10:39:00 PM
Hey David. Just got my heart broken with these lines. Great work. Keep them coming.
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Date: 6/17/2021 5:56:00 PM
Got lots new stuff.
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Date: 6/17/2021 5:55:00 PM
So simple yet sweet. Thanks for ya comment on sleazy sally.
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Date: 3/24/2021 2:26:00 PM
Oh David!! My heart well you have captured all things loss...I have missed you!! I just popped in for a bit. I hope all is well with you. You still create such astounding work and I really like this one...such angst... I haven’t written in a while but maybe soon (you know how I love to drift at sea!!) lol!! Big Big huggs!! And much much love!! Cap’n Deb
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Date: 1/12/2021 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful piece David I adored this write!
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Date: 3/11/2021 11:16:00 AM
Hi Yolanda, thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment...Hope you are well.