The Girl Won - Once Upon a Time

The setting is a verdant wood our heroine appears;
Her crimson cape is flowing as she sings along the trail.
Eager to reach to her Grandma's house her travel is quick and intent.

Grinning maliciously the wolf awaits his prey.
Inside the house he sets the trap for Lil's Red's arrival.
Reaching Grandma's house on time she enters through the door;
Looking in the villains eyes our heroine catches on.

Why Grandma you don't look yourself, yes something is awry.
Our heroine is quick to think, she's way to young to die.
Now on his knees, face on the floor with Red's foot on his neck.  Lil' Red's a 
           Kung Fu Master, now who would have expected that!

For the Once Upon a Time Contest
February 2, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/8/2016 12:12:00 PM
- Wonderful written and time to congratulate, Ann! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2016 11:12:00 AM
Way to go Ann, cute write.
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Date: 2/7/2016 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Love the kung fu :-)
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/8/2016 9:23:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Eve :)
Date: 2/7/2016 7:25:00 PM
Anytime Ann...
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:27:00 PM
Well done in this contest, Ann. Kung Foo Master... who woulda thought? lol
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/7/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by for a read Lin :)
Date: 2/6/2016 4:22:00 PM
Ann, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/7/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read Linda.
Date: 2/6/2016 11:51:00 AM
Ann, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a aprt of my contest :)*smiles* -luloo
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/7/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks for being the host :)
Date: 2/6/2016 11:07:00 AM
Lovely acrostic story Ann congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Roske
Date: 2/7/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to read Jan.
Date: 2/3/2016 12:54:00 PM
This poem comes alive within the reader's heart as the story unfolds before them. The imagery and emotions lift you from your world and place you in a fairytale. Emile.
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