The Girl With the Blackberry Eyes

The Girl with the Blackberry Eyes

So there you stand, with your yawn colored slickers,
wishing your life to be more
Fruit flavored fantasies sprinkled with stickers 
so much is waiting in store

Someone is longing your destined arrival,
desires held loose in her hand 
All that you need to effect your survival,
I promise, she will understand

While sunny the days of a cloudless expanse
in fields lowly rutted with fear
Down footprints of mud in a circular dance,
a garden now beckons you here

A wood picket fence and a hedge overgrown
beyond an old gate bearing rust
That cringes and creaks near the wicked seeds sown
about southern winds once were thrust 

Where vines cling an arbor in strangling grip,
creeping like worms neath your feet
Proud of their thorns and the flesh they do rip,
souring fruits ever sweet

Beware of this realm where the petals now bleed
with faces apart from the norm
On barbed wire stems of a nevermore need,
now cast of an unending storm

For here waits a child with a part in her hair
and roots tethered deep to the ground
A bouquet of pain offered up, if you dare,
in silence she speaks without sound

So follow this path of a nightmarish dream,
where nothing that lives ever dies
But hold tight your tongue for she hates when you scream,
the girl with the blackberry eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/2/2017 1:29:00 AM
A somewhat dark kinda write, but beautiful as always, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Jo, I thought I'd step over to the dark side for a bit. :)
Date: 2/1/2017 11:58:00 AM
Great stuff Chris, a fine read.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2017 1:26:00 PM
Thanks so much again. I appreciate it Gary
Date: 2/1/2017 11:07:00 AM
You certainly write well Mr. Green a splendid read.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward, I am glad you liked this one. It is a personal favorite of mine.
Date: 1/31/2017 11:33:00 PM
This is a song too, isn't it? :) I love the last stanza, I saw you built the poem around the title. I do this too sometimes, or around a meme, or around a piece of music, a phrase I heard someone say... I always have a notebook and a pen near me to jot these things down.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2017 8:32:00 AM
Nope, just a poem but I am glad it sung to you my friend. Thanks so much for always leaving such nice comments for me.
Date: 1/31/2017 11:31:00 PM
You have skills my friend!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/1/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard, I'm glad you liked this one
Date: 1/31/2017 8:32:00 PM
Hi Chris, What vivid images you have created . The last four lines were kind of creepy. Was that your intention? Nevertheless a well written write my friend. A without doubt seven- Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 8:42:00 PM
I just felt like being a little creepy. I saw this graphic today of a girl who looked like Wednesday Addams with blackberries in here eyes...so I just went there. I'm glad you liked it my sweet friend.
Date: 1/31/2017 7:03:00 PM
Another gem of a poem, Chris! Love the title too mate!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 7:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Rick. I built the poem around the title, which I hardly ever do.
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