The Girl That Bought the Sandals

The girl that bought sandals
To walk up the country road
Realized her feet were sore
She  had a decision to buy
Comfortable shoes for walking

She decided to search for shoes
At the shopping mall
Walking from one shoe store
to another
In order to ponder what she wanted
She wanted to search for styles

Determined to buy shoes
That were comfortable
She came across a brand
Skehers a shoe for walking
Tried them on purchased them
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 10:32 AM
A fun write shopping for shoes. Good shoes are the best to buy or feet will Hurt. Have a blessed day writing away...............
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Hello Paula, shopping of r good shoes is important. So feet doe not hurt. Hugs.
Baker Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 6:18 AM
She found the good ones, Darlene. Nice poem my poetess friend. Hugs, Bill
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 12:24 PM
Hello Bill, yes she found better shoes to wear. Now her feet are comfortable while walking. Enjoy your day my poet friend.
Foster Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 8:21 AM
I love to walk... best shoes makes a big difference. Love your writes... Ann
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 16, 2022 at 2:49 PM
Hello Ann, yes the best shoes does make the beat walk.I do agree. Thank you Ann. Hugs.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 7:27 PM
Dear Darlene, The girl is smart! she knew purchasing comfortable shoes were far more important than looking for brands! So realistic - your poem is brilliant with a sweet message! Love and friendship ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 15, 2022 at 7:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes the girl was smart to know to purchase sensible shoes for walking. Love & Friendship Darlene
George Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 10:18 PM
Hi, Darlene, as we go for walks, sandals or shoes that are comfortable for walking are preferred to shoes that are trendy. A simple sweet poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 4:04 AM
Hello Valsa, yes Valsa tis is so true. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Romios Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 8:52 PM
Darlene, a sweet poem about real life! People favor a brand that works with their Feet, right? Glad the girl found them! May your week be magical Huggs, Panagiota
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes it is about real life people. There are many people that favor a a brand of shoe. The girl wanted proper shoes for walking. She found them. Hugs Darlene
Ashley Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 4:32 PM
Dear Darlene, indeed foot comfort is a must when walking. I enjoy your lovely poem so much. Warmest wishes, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Hello Susan, Thank you Susan. Wearing proper shoes for walking is important. Hugs my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 4:07 PM
I like that brand myself!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:18 AM
Hello Kim, I have a pair of those myself. Hugs.
M  Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 4:02 PM
So true Darlene….is that girl you? Sweet poem……Debx
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Hello Deb, no that girl is not me. Thank you for the lovely comment. Darlenex
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2022 at 3:33 PM
So important to get the right shoes Darlene, you want them comfortable if you're doing a lot of walking. Tom
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Hello Tom, yes comfortable shoes are important for walking. Enjoy your day my friend.
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