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The Girl In the Sky

Beautiful and praised, the moon is someone beloved, Someone who others watched But she was lonely. Left alone in a vast space, With noone to love her The way she wanted them to, She felt abandoned. People talked about her, But never to her Leaving her out of their fun; Their late night walks And their celebrations. She was a lovely flower, With gentle features that made her beautiful, caring grey eyes And plump rosy lips, And bright bold colors that made her unique And shine like a peacock. Everyday she wondered what she can do To make them appreciate her, But she never notices how much she is cared for As she faces away from those who cherish her. One day there will be someone Who loves the moon as she wants to be, Who can make her happy And put a smile on her face. So the moon waits, And waits, For that day to come, Keeping hope in her heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/17/2019 12:18:00 AM
Beautiful write and personification.(in my culture we see moon all planet as male and with specific virtues as to astrology.) I enjoyed your POV. :) Sunita
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Date: 2/24/2018 11:47:00 PM
Touching poem! bbn
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